Comments | venat: PW fic lol.

venat

PW fic lol.

Nov 04, 2007 17:23

This is my first fic. Ever. Seriously. Be prepared for ultimate fail.

Title: Serendipity
Pairings: Phoenix/Edgeworth
Rating: G
Words: 1,938
Warnings: Spoilers for PWAA Case 4
Summary: Phoenix is conflicted and emotionally backwards. Edgeworth isn't much better.
Disclaimer: Not mine. Duh.
A/N: Theme 01, written for 30-kisses.

( It's during that case... )

phoenix wright, fic, 30 kisses

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venat November 9 2007, 23:58:53 UTC

Thank you! :)

izzy_the_hutt November 7 2007, 07:19:03 UTC

Love it, love it, love it. I can feel the tension crackling in the air between them ^_^.

venat November 9 2007, 23:59:21 UTC

Thanks so much! :)

silverhalo November 7 2007, 08:40:45 UTC

SO beautiful. <3 I absolutely adore the part where Edgeworth starts babbling and insulting Phoenix even though he came with the express PURPOSE of thanking him. XD

venat November 10 2007, 00:01:39 UTC

Ahaha. Edgeworth's emotional failings strike again. XP

I'm so glad you liked it. :)

sola November 7 2007, 10:37:59 UTC

Very neatly sewn together and absolutely believable, and sweet to boot. <3!

venat November 10 2007, 00:02:12 UTC

Thank you! :DDD♥

azure15 November 7 2007, 13:09:10 UTC

My word, you have these characters down perfectly! This is NaruMitsu as it should be, tentative, reluctant at first on Edgeworth's behalf, Phoenix ultimately making the first move. This is wonderful, and if you're taking up a challenge with this pairing, I can't wait to see more from you :D

venat November 10 2007, 00:03:06 UTC

They have such an awesome dynamic, don't they? :D♥