of white gloves and goldenballs

Nov 09, 2007 01:46


more or less 1023 words and double-spaces concerning íker casillas & david beckham, with brief mentions of respect and gratitude: Christopher O'Riley and his inspirations; also Edward Carey for: it is well known that lovers hold hands.

articulate
for the wonderful tristeayer

I gloved and greaved
my hands, my legs, my thoughts,
leaving no part of my person
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tristeayer November 8 2007, 20:42:40 UTC
and yes another terrific piece. without those secret envies that girls have (i have been exposed to too much tv lately), i take pride in you and what you can do.(uyy XD)

wait, i take it back. i envy your name and you know why, damn it.*drools for gael aka stephane*

but you write admirably darling dearest.:)

i miss you stef. you're practically the last of the decent sanity left in my circles, and i havent got much to begin with. this setting i have now is not helping my my decade-early mid-life crisis (that's why ive been bugging you about the magazine, sorry). lets have another movie date before classes start why dont we? come and i shall prepare the place. then we can talk about the magazine and (formally) start it and talk some more and watch and swoon over gael and watch and talk some more and the world can shut down outside and we'd still be happy as cats, well, obese cats.XD

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verbigerette November 9 2007, 02:59:48 UTC
this comment means a lot to me iris ♥
can you go tomorrow to the exhibit? franny says she's going, and gen said we can pass some... stuff. D:

ok so i can go to your house tomorrow? well, since, we only have 2 days left.

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eternitybreaks November 8 2007, 21:05:41 UTC
Wow, I envy you. Your writing is gorgeous &hearts! Poetic writing can go so wrong, but you made it look effortless. Stunning :)

I love the slight humour in this David, what were you thinking! She almost came in. And before you could say friends can cook in each other’s houses, I am, not Gary. This made me smile.

Going into my little box of recommendations, for sure.

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verbigerette November 9 2007, 03:02:05 UTC
that's such a huge compliment, thank you :">

i loved watching that video of gaz and becks (acting like housewives?) in each other's homes. :D

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analysezceci November 8 2007, 21:22:56 UTC
Public transport, the smile that belongs to no one else, the mention of Gary... This is fantastic. ♥

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verbigerette November 9 2007, 03:16:47 UTC
aw, thank you. ♥

transportation- isn't iker sweet? somehow reminds me of david silva (i find it nice that his father drives him to training.)

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choccies November 9 2007, 01:23:25 UTC
There were so many beautiful lines in here that I can hardly pick a favorite. I love how you focused on how personal and touching it was with the nakedness of Ikers hands. (It actually reminds me of that one scen in Romeo and Juliet)

It was just amazing.

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verbigerette November 9 2007, 03:24:03 UTC
i intended to stress on the nakedness, on that intimacy. it sounds weird, having a G rating, but there were several lines with innuendo ;) or was it just me.

Romeo and Juliet- i actually forgot how watching that film was like as i've seen it about... six years ago (nooo, i'm getting old).

i greatly appreciate the comment. :D

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motsdesoie November 9 2007, 03:52:50 UTC
I have a weird feeling on my chest after reading this! It is incredibly beautiful and your writing is amazing, I just want more and more and more.

*Sighs* I miss David/Iker terribly. It was my favourite pairing so I want to thank you for writing this.

Can't say it enough, it's absolutely gorgeous.

*mems*

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verbigerette November 9 2007, 03:58:16 UTC
hope the weird feeling is a good kind of weird. ;)

i miss them too.

thank you, thanks so much for reading, appreciating, and for keeping it in your memories. ♥

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