of white gloves and goldenballs

[verbigerette]

more or less 1023 words and double-spaces concerning íker casillas & david beckham, with brief mentions of respect and gratitude: Christopher O'Riley and his inspirations; also Edward Carey for: it is well known that lovers hold hands.

articulate
for the wonderful tristeayer

I gloved and greaved
my hands, my legs, my thoughts,
leaving no part of my person
exposed

Comments

[oh_so_blase]

this was beautiful.
i love it.

I miss David/Iker =/

[verbigerette]

I miss David/Iker =/

don't we all.

thanks for reading, glad you liked it. :)

[thememoryslides]

that was so beautiful, your writing style is so incredible. its so rare to find such great david/iker fics, well done. adding to mems.

[verbigerette]

thanks for reading, and for the wonderful comment. :)

[janierotten]

It was beautifully written. I mentionned before too, how oh-my-gawd-awesome and slow artsy film style your writing it, and that's absolutely true. I'd kill towrite like this, but anyway, about the fic: wonderful. Slow moving, very, very beautiful imagery, and so...perceptive? I think. The I am not Gary made me smile, and Iker's so reluctant, in a way, to be loved, that's awesome too. &hearts

[verbigerette]

thank you so much, and i hope you have a great birthday. ♥

i really wanted to control the pace in this one, as it's only a few words over a thousand. and also, i was (and still am) worried about the change of pov, hoped it worked.

Iker's so reluctant
yes, but he let himself be reeled in by david's charm so easily without noticing. :D

i always appreciate your comments. :)

[strascina]

I looked at his father, and by the light shamelessly stolen from the glimmer and strobe, I make out the waxworks of his face, Madrid and all its stars in his swollen eyes.

love love lovely ♥

(you really, really, really- this cannot be stressed greater- should write more.)

[verbigerette]

i felt a bit awkward with this line, glad i didn't change it.

thank you, i always love it when you comment. :>

i'll try to heed your advice and write more- hopefully with more time (and more 8-0s?)

♥

[nadi_wamos]

I looked at his father, and by the light shamelessly stolen from the glimmer and strobe, I make out the waxworks of his face, Madrid and all its stars in his swollen eyes.

Your imagery is the best. I loved this all, memming. :)

[verbigerette]

thanks a lot for reading, commenting (and memming).

&, glad you liked. :)