of white gloves and goldenballs

Nov 09, 2007 01:46


more or less 1023 words and double-spaces concerning íker casillas & david beckham, with brief mentions of respect and gratitude: Christopher O'Riley and his inspirations; also Edward Carey for: it is well known that lovers hold hands.

articulate
for the wonderful tristeayer

I gloved and greaved
my hands, my legs, my thoughts,
leaving no part of my person
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jumping_down November 10 2007, 13:12:58 UTC
Amazing, hands down. Your Iker is just amazing.

*adds to memories*

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verbigerette November 11 2007, 23:14:36 UTC
thank you! i really enjoyed writing iker. :D

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towhateverend November 12 2007, 06:54:52 UTC
*wibbles* You make me ache for them. Woe is me.

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verbigerette December 9 2007, 12:18:11 UTC
Sorry for the late reply, but yes.
Just looking at the old pictures leaves me feeling bittersweet. :[
Thank you for commenting :)

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yetunknown November 24 2007, 11:36:40 UTC
oh, truly lovely. mention of being Bernabeu's spoiled child, gloves as a shield, Gary... just everything really. it was perfect.

and your wrting! it just flowed effortlessly.

(although, I admit, I'm not a big fan of Iker/David. can't really see it happening because I don't follow La Liga, I suppose.)

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verbigerette December 9 2007, 12:14:13 UTC
I'm late, but thank you so much! Glad you liked it even if you don't really follow Iker/David. :D

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yetunknown December 11 2007, 13:39:09 UTC
oh, man. since then, I've discovered picspams! and videos! now I'm a total convert. *sigh*

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monstermess December 20 2007, 09:39:10 UTC
Mindblowing. I cannot fully describe what this does to me, how in awe I am of your writing craft, so I will stop at Mindblowing when actually I mean more.

(Sorry this is awfully late)

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verbigerette December 22 2007, 00:44:54 UTC
I really appreciate it, makes me want to write more :D and i'm glad you still made a comment. Thanks dear! :)

p.s. your icon :) Paris, Je T'aime is a wonderful movie.

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iamyourmind December 29 2007, 03:41:23 UTC
This makes me feel sad and happy at the same time =) It's wonderfully well written ♥

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verbigerette December 29 2007, 10:00:31 UTC
Thank you! :)

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