Fic - Coda to 2.15, H5O

[veronicaluv]

Bad language. Pre-slash. Scary!Steve.

Comments

[kitmerlot1213]

This? Was awesome and definitely something Steve would do--you don't mess with ohana.

Great job :):)

[veronicaluv]

Thanks! Steve needed to exhibit some badassery!

[simplyn2deep]

so awesome! Kawika scares the hell out of me, but I bet he's the sweetest lol.

great work with this

[veronicaluv]

Thank you! I love Kawika and wish we could see more of him - like you said, he's scary, but I think he has a good heart - if Steve asked him a favor under these circumstances, he'd be there!

[kristen999]

Wow. That was chilling and something I think Steve would do to ensure Danny and his family didn't have to be dragged through another ordeal. *shivers*

And this:

"Hell, yeah, I remember you, Uncle Steve. You're Danny's partner, and I tell you, listening to you and him on the phone was pretty damn hilarious. And, uh, just between you and me, if sweet little Gracie hadn't been so easy to find," he made a gun with his hand and pointed it at Steve's forehead, pretending to pull the trigger, "you'd have made a great secondary target. Danny would've never forgiven himself if something happened to you."

Eeep. Yeah, the same thought had crossed my mind, but the way you had Rick mention it...wow.

[veronicaluv]

Rick was a nasty piece of work and made it pretty easy to hate him - I think he'd make a great continuing villain. And Steve wouldn't be so generous next time...;)

Glad you liked it, thank you!

[alamo_girl80]

Awesome. And a very Steve-thing to do. Love it!

[veronicaluv]

Thank you! We need more Protective!Badass!Steve, we really do ;).

[gunslingaaahhh]

i love steve dangerous and angry.

i also love kawika and kamekona.

[veronicaluv]

Me too! Let that badass flag fly, Steve - you know you want to;). In the meantime, fanfic will have to do it for you.

Thanks for reading!