Psycho, Psycho 1/1 [Aoi/Uruha]

[veroxion]

Title: Psycho, Psycho
Chapters: 1/1 (Oneshot)
Author: veroxion
Beta: n/a
Genre: Horror/Romance
Rating: R
Warnings: Stalking, Self-harm
Pairings: Aoi/Uruha

Synopsis: I'm gonna write you a letter, coloured in red.

Comments: I'm back! I ended up coming home early. Lyrics belong to DOGinTheパラレルワールドオーケストラ. Not beta-read, unfortunately! Still not sure whether I like

Comments

[juuu_chan]

WOW.

It was very good! very touching.
And as much as I would like to read more, I think I'll enjoy this story more the way it is now. Open ending.
Really good job.

[veroxion]

Thank you so much! Usually I'm a bit iffy on open endings, since I don't like leaving things unfinished, but I rather liked what I did here ^_^ <3

[xadowangel]

oh no! I don't think uruha will just run after aoi just like that. He must be freaked out. And aoi is a psych!!! Omg that was some gruesome way of hurting oneself!! I got goosebumps....sheesh!!!!
Great work, as usual...love your work. But I soooooooooooo wish to read more of it.....if only.........*sighs*

[veroxion]

LOL. I was feeling rather... sadistic and inspired when I wrote this. Blame the creepy lyrics I was listening to.

Well, I dislike leaving things unfinished, so I may or may not end up writing something XD But I'm not really sure, since I have mixed opinions on what would happen... :P

Thanks for reading, sweetheart! <3 Your words make me happy ^__^

[hellionx609]

This is really good. I love first person because you get to go in depth with what the characters are feeling. It puts you in their shoes. You pull it off beautifully.

[veroxion]

Oh wow. Thank you! Personally, I think I struggle with first person. I agree, it's much more in depth but sometimes I find it difficult to convey everything without is sounding so repetitive. So I'm relived and psyched that you think I pull it off beautifully. Really, thank you! That's a wonderful compliment to receive ; v ;

Thanks for commenting, dear! I always enjoy your comments ^^

And now I'm off to molest your updates.

[hellionx609]

Molest away! lol.
I also do think that writing in first person is difficult, because as a writer you really want to get into what everyone is doing, but there are times, like this story, where first person is the absolute correct thing to do.

[veroxion]

Exactly! I've always struggled with it, but on the odd occasion, I think I can pull it off. First person is the only way to go sometimes, especially for character depth, which is what this story needed :)

[veroxion]

Aoi has a loose screw in his head ^^U

I'm pleased you liked this! I'd like to think I grasped how deep his feelings are, and it's great you can actually feel them. It means I've succeeded in something :D

Thanks so much for your lovely comment! I really appreciate the feedback <3

[veroxion]

Aw, thank you! It's always great when someone says that to me ;; v ;; <3

And it's not a problem! A comment is a comment, no matter how late it is, and it's always appreciated from me :D <3

[dani_25]

Aoi freaked the hell out!

I think Uruha would feel the same, I mean, freak out totally. Even anyone that would got the chance to have a..kinda psycho stalker... anyone would freak out for sure. Except if you're one hell of a sadist, maybe...maybe..

Written beautifully.

<333333

[veroxion]

Uruha would be freaked out. I think anyone would to be perfectly honest, aha. I creeped myself out a bit writing this.

Thank you so much for commenting, my dear! <3