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Aug 25, 2006 11:49

Title: Culpable
Author: Vertiline
Characters: Michael
Rating: G

Word Count: 759
Summary: Michael reflects: Maybe his real crime was committed long after getting into Fox River, not anytime before. MichaelSara
A/N: This is my first PB fic, and it’s just a short drabble. It also is the first real post in my new LJ - how very exciting. I hope you ( Read more... )

prison break, fic, michael/sara

Comments 31

nymphadoraklutz August 26 2006, 00:44:31 UTC

I love it! Your characterization of Michael is spot-on. :)

vertiline August 27 2006, 00:10:20 UTC

Thanks so much! I was so nervous posting this -- it's pretty nerve racking making your first foray into a new fandom :o) I'm so glad you liked it!

anonymous August 26 2006, 01:44:44 UTC

I really like the way you wrote it, it's really well written. You should write more fics on those two ^^. And I'll probably stick around to read them 'cause you've got talent for that. Good job!

Cath.

anonymous August 26 2006, 01:51:27 UTC

This was great! As someone else mentioned, your Michael POV was dead-on. I'd love to see more.

Culpable anonymous August 26 2006, 03:07:55 UTC

Wow, I got to end of this and had an Oliver moment, "Please, can I have some more?" So well written, beautiful use of language and, as several others have said, your Michael is spot-on. This is your first PB fic, but is it your first fic? Either way, terrific debut - kudos!

Re: Culpable vertiline August 27 2006, 00:12:29 UTC

Thanks for your kind comment! To answer your question, though, nope, I've been hanging out in the Harry Potter fandom for many years.

As for your other question: I'm workin' on it! :o)

thennen August 26 2006, 05:46:27 UTC

This is wonderful! You write very well.

She shouldn’t have to defend herself with syringes and shards of broken Plexiglas and crawl along ventilation systems to escape from the very people she wanted so badly to help.
And that, right there, in a pretty, well-worded sentence, is why I love Sara.

vertiline August 27 2006, 00:13:58 UTC

thennen August 27 2006, 04:46:40 UTC

In most of the shows I watch, I find it really difficult to like the main females a lot of the time -- which is why it is so strange that I really like and respect Sara as a character. I think she's a wonderful character, and I really hope the show delves into her early life later this season!
I agree. All of the fandoms save one that I've been are male-dominated. I tend to relate to them better, despite being female myself, and prefer to write in a male perspective than a female. I also agree with you apropos Sara. She doesn't fall into the female cliche at all, but she manages to retain her grace and feminity while still being a strong and independant character. Basically, she makes me girlcrush on her like mad.