The Self-Importance of Being Jensen: Part Three

[vicious_trade]

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Part Three

Comments

[vicious_trade]

Jeez! You know how to make a girl blush! I truly appreciate the detail you went into - I couldn't have asked for a better review!

I don't even know where to begin - I basically wrote a story that I would want to read. Hey, maybe it's selfish, but I really enjoyed writing it. I love terms of endearment, so I my favorites in there. Gotta have some hurt/comfort, and Jared is my favorite to torture. Love me some protective!Jensen. I'm really into domestic fic right now. Throw in a plot, and bam! I had a story.

Glad you liked Danneel - she was my antagonist, but I just couldn't portray her as an evil bitch.

Thank you for gushing. You made my month and all my unease about posting this go away. Now I can't wait to finish something else! You're a peach :)

[minx999]

This was utterly fantastic. Your descriptions, dialog and the way you captured the guys made it so real for me. I loved Jensen taking care of Jared. Loved the quiet struggle he was going through about the complexity of his relationships. Loved Jared's humor and love for Jensen. Just a wonderful warm fuzzy read!

[vicious_trade]

I'm glad you enjoyed it - and that you liked the warm fuzziness. Sometimes I worried I was getting too dark when I was really going for semi-lighthearted.

Thanks so much!

[natalscar]

I haven't commented on a fic in a while because I've liked a few but there hasn't been anything that has "blown me out of the water"....until now. That was wonderful and realistic and touching and I don't know any other adjectives that would do it justice without repeating myself. Wonderful writer and exquisite storytelling.

[vicious_trade]

Eep! You're way too generous, but I'm glad I could hook you enough for the comment. I'm really glad you enjoyed it - I loved writing it.

[demonalove]

I really liked this story. It was very tender, beautiful. The part where Jared asked Jensen if he was real, was very poignant. Heck, the whole story is poignant. You have a knack for description. Sometimes I get bored with description if it seems like it's going on for too long or there is too much detail, because I have a perfectly good imagination, I know how to fill in the blanks. But, your description was just enough and well crafted. I hope this encourages you to write more because I will definitely read whatever you write next.

[vicious_trade]

Yay! I'm relieved - sometimes I dabble a little too much with the descriptions, and at the same time I totally agree with you. Too much detail can be boring and completely unnecessary. I'm glad it didn't come off that way for you.

This experience has definitely encouraged me to write more. Thank you so much!

[norwich36]

I enjoyed this.

[vicious_trade]

Thanks! I'm glad.