Fic: if I never see your face again (I don't mind)

Jan 12, 2011 20:52


Title: if I never see your face again (I don't mind) 
Author:  vicious_trade 
Rating: PG13
Summary:  Sometimes Sam just gets this look in his eye. Fevers and listlessness and swollen glands are always T-minus twenty-four hours at that point.
Word Count: 6000
Warnings: none
Prompt: The ohsam h/c fic challenge - full prompt inside. Basically Sam refuses to admit ( Read more... )

fic, gen, challenge

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phx69 January 13 2011, 05:28:02 UTC
I really loved this. I got chills when that idiot actually made the stupid mistake of telling Dean that Dean`s little brother should blow him. Can anyone say how dangerous it is to poke a Dean with a Sammy stické

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debbiel66 January 13 2011, 05:48:20 UTC
I really loved this! Great job bringing that prompt to life and your Dean voice was spot-on. Thank you... I'll be reading this again. :)

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dime_for_12 January 13 2011, 06:01:47 UTC
!!!!!!!!

That ^ is my brain on this fic C: Everything about this is just warm and smushy (?) and so. friggin. perfect, I can't even.

I will cuddle this forever, no lie :DDDDD

eta: and looking at your journal, I have loved every fic you've written so far, so ... yeah, I'm going to friend you, unless you mind, and then you can just tell me off >;D

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vicious_trade January 13 2011, 06:07:22 UTC
Yeeps! Thanks a bunch! Uh, totes friend me - the feeling is mutual on my end. You're awesome :D

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carocali January 13 2011, 06:04:37 UTC
Thanks for this! I love how they try so hard to pretend that everything's alright until it gets to the point of no return. They played 'Children Shouldn't Play with Dead Things" today and at the end when Sam breaks his hand, they just play it off like it's nothing. Men! I like the way you did this MUCH better than that! :D

Really nicely done - loved the whole chronology of it!

:D
Caroline

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vonnie836 January 13 2011, 06:34:47 UTC
Oh wow, I think this is awesome. Loved how you developed it and brought it up to a really intense third act. Just like a dramatic piece of music or an opera. Anyway, the teasing in between the worry was so Dean and I adored that Sam got him back in the end with the "You get that look..." think. Great story. Hugs, Vonnie

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