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Hey, I can’t help it but to comment you! Your poems are great! Very meaningful and representative of how you yourself may feel as that exact time. This is a great technique to utilise when writing ( Read more... )

I found it quite interesting, how last week I wrote my own interpretation of ‘When I have fears that I may seas to be’, by John Keat and this week we actually managed to interpret the actual poem within our tutorials. ‘When I have fears that I may seas to be’ Depicts a pentameter; a fear of death.

‘Before my pen has glean’d my teeming brain’, ( Read more... )

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Hello Kelly, your piece of writing was very well written. Only I am left wondering what the light mentioned in the beginning of the text actually is. I have a basic, yet very immediate and cliché ( Read more... )

John Keats-

As the semester closes in, this poem really implies the fears in which are being felt, not only by myself individually, but by the many people who are faced with hardships, whether within university or within personal life.  My own interpretation

When the fears within me have caught up to capture who I want to be,

before the pen in which ( Read more... )

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Hey Jessica, your poem was very well written it shows the numerous things you were feeling at the time, the use of adjectives really highlights your thoughts and feelings. Great work =] xx

When that someone is in your life for a motive, it is usually to meet a need you have expressed. They have arrived to assist you through a difficulty, to supply you with guidance and to aid you physically, emotionally or spiritually.

They are there for the reason you need them to be. For the reason you always dreamed of then, without any wrongdoing ( Read more... )

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Hey! Your piece of writing was very well written and also has a sense of humour. I believe you wrote things that many of us believe, but never actually say. An example may be "Beating your friend in an exam". It really shows your personality, although you may believe it is 'cheesy' as u stated ( Read more... )

Recently I have been undazzled with the truth, so as I skimmed through Schwiebert I came across a short, yet meaningful poem about the truth, and how the truth is actually told to us, whether we may be children, teenagers or adults; reality is many of us cannot deal with the heartache the truth may bring. A poem by Emily Dickinson- my own ( Read more... )

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Hey, this was a very short yet meaningful poem. It seems as though you long and desire attention from your boyfriend. That is just what I had grasped from the poem. It is very good that you can write about personal emotions and experiences. Great Work =)

Many of us have the power to abuse the fruit of vines,

to try and to attempt in making our uselessness become

something more. These voids however have the power

to turn to failure, turning into something more vital.

The sense of emptiness will always be reflected, assisting

in allowing and permitting public emptiness to last forever.

Denial ( Read more... )