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DRABBLES; 15-minute challenges

Feb 24, 2010 00:44

15-minute drabbles ; various pairings
roselit @ viewscape
angst, gen ; varying wordcounts
A/N: These are short pieces I wrote for several of the challenges on kpfw 9.0, in which writers were given 15 minutes to produce something based on a given prompt (pictures, poems/words, songs). All of these are stand-alone writings, unrelated to one another.

( let's paint the picture of the perfect place; )

p: yunho/junsu, p: jaejoong/changmin, #fic: drabble, rating: pg, p: jaejoong/junsu, #access: public, p: jaejoong/yoochun, rating: r

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roselit February 24 2010, 06:56:54 UTC

i'm starting to develop a thing for hosu, and i kind of blame onew, dies. ♥; but urgh, i agree!

i've been so angst-ridden lately, this is kind of ridiculous, lol. ;A; but trust me, i didn't have much joy writing that either, as much as i like that particular piece. ;;

a;sldf♥

oldwillow_brook February 24 2010, 06:40:27 UTC

asdkjfalsdkr WOW.

If this is speedwriting drabbles, JUST KEEP WRITING THIS WAY. This is wow, amazing.

You've written drabbles that seem to somehow fit each other but don't. They all have the same connection and if read chronically it could make sense and that's whats beautiful about it.

You're Junsu is heartbreaking but so warm, as if he wants whats best for Jaejoong rather than force his own happiness at the expense of his bandmates.

Your comparisons within each drabble just continously blow me away and pull me right in.

In the first drabble this line. WOW.

Jaejoong gives him a look, the same one that Junsu swears says everything, but he's just not listening quite rightThat it literally just Jaejoong saying Yes I did it but I did it for you with you and not with whom you think I did. And its just Junsu's so not oblivious but he's so unaware of Jaejoong, that Jaejoong is such a confusing spot because of Junsu's desire and love that he doesn't want to interpret something for what it isn't. (even if it so obviously is ( ... )

roselit February 24 2010, 07:09:21 UTC

oh gosh, lol as;ldjf i have no idea where to begin. i can honestly say this is the first time i've ever received such an extensive comment, and i'm feeling extremely flattered and giddy all at once right now. ;A; just - thank you so much ( ... )

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roselit February 24 2010, 07:17:43 UTC

A;DSLKJF DIES, YOU ARE TOO ADORABLE, REE. ♥♥; guhh, you know it's totally your fault that i've been attempting hosu more lately, right? guhh, they're kind of really precious in their own way, and i'm really liking them more and more lately. :(( ♥;

so ecstatic right now, you have no idea~ ♥ thank you so much, bb!

eta - i just realized how repetitive my comment sounded LOL a;ldskjf i am kind of ridiculous right now /dies ;;

engraved_16 February 24 2010, 08:54:30 UTC

:DDDDDDDDDDDDD
loooved the jaesuchun :)
i wish they'd just get together

♥

roselit February 24 2010, 20:14:06 UTC

hee, thank you! they really do need to get together, hm. :) ♥

obsidianinks February 24 2010, 09:44:57 UTC

some of the jaesu drabbles are linked! im sure of it.. *narrows eyes* huhuhu~ your writing is awesome to the heavens.. (oh how cheesy, kill me now) but i still cant get enough of it... i really was in awe as i read it.. simply because the same thought kept rerunning in my head.. 'how can she write such stuff in 15 minutes!?!?'

you. are. wonderful. and something wholefully different. (maybe a god-sent gift)

roselit February 24 2010, 20:16:20 UTC

possibly! lol, a lot of these were written within a short time span, one right after another, so. XD; and gahh, you really flatter me too much, just. ♥♥; i've never done timed ficwriting like this before, but it's definitely a challenge!

a;sldkfj please don't make me blush anymore than i am, cries. thank you so much. ♥