Comments | violettechimera: if i could make the world as pure and strange as what i see, i'd put you in a mirror i'd put in front of me, linger on your pale blue eyes...

violettechimera

if i could make the world as pure and strange as what i see, i'd put you in a mirror i'd put in front of me, linger on your pale blue eyes...

Oct 29, 2003 20:40

this is about a boy, whose punctuation i have not yet worked out ( Read more... )

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ex0teric October 30 2003, 21:08:59 UTC

I like that format. Especially the way it allows for very dense meaning; and it is physically more dense than poetry generally is as well. Not to say that poetry is worthless, but it is often a waste of space :)

violettechimera October 30 2003, 22:33:03 UTC

*giggle* you make me smile, luff.
and i haven't spoken to you in so long. it's nice to see your name.

ex0teric October 30 2003, 23:11:41 UTC

I enjoy making people smile!
Good to see yours as well, now respond to my IM :p

mendaciloquent November 4 2003, 21:14:50 UTC

I like the middle one best.

Welcome back.

violettechimera November 5 2003, 12:07:58 UTC

thank you.

tinkerbell_24_ November 28 2003, 06:50:23 UTC

ahhh! the one person whose updates I love to read and I was unaware that she updated andandandand it took me nearly a month to become enlightened. * runs about in a frenzy * okok. I've collected myself. I think all the versions are quite beautiful, however, the first one is my favorite.

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candiedangel March 19 2004, 01:54:44 UTC

fabulousness.