Title: a trip down memory lane Fandom: exo Pairing: suchen/jundae Rating: r Word count: 4,100 Summary: It takes a visitor at 1am in the morning to go straight to heaven.( “Falling in love is always the hardest.” )
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH YOU POSTED WHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
ok now that that's done.
clambering down the stairs with haphazardly before stumbling towards the door days were endless with soft touches and nights, were spent kissing languidly under the stars. Although we haven’t seen each other in year, this is just plain awkward lower back aching with a dull thud. did you proofread at ALL?
He promises, later, to never fall in love again in the hopes of avoiding such feelings, feelings that feel like his heart is going to be ripped into pieces. It’s better for everyone, he concludes bitterly, especially for me. Can I just say!! I really like it when people write rambling kind of breakdowns like this because it helps convey the point of HEART AND EMOTION and I don't know what my point is anymore -
“I-I think what I am trying to say is I love you, and that I never stopped loving you.” I'm meant to be the chii(sy) one but I think this label should be bestowed upon you instead
ok gurl i was just expecting a 'oh hey you posted kthxbai' comment, but the uber long one is fine as well.
dID YOU KNOW THAT I HAVE AN AMAZING ABILITY THAT WHEN I ADD SOMETHING EXTRA INTO A STORY, IT TURNS INTO SOMETHING STUFFED UP. THE PAINS OF BEING ME ;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;
aw aw aw. thanks for sticking with this...cheesy thing idek. though, your angsty ways are influencing me, bECAUSE LOOK AT THE TRAUMATIC [OK NOT THAT TRAUMATIC] PAIN I MADE CHEN CHEN GO THROUGH HAHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAH.
sobs. my writing is nowhere near great. you have to teach me your ways senpai <3333
The pros and cons of going after 'Shure is that there is barely anything to point out anymore OTL Ah well, as they say: It’s the new beginning of a new day, and the start of a new story //laughs and rolls off (Hardly relevant but I had an urge to ctrl+p it in)
He leans back down to level himself so that he is face to face next to the younger. Duuuude, if you're face to face wouldn't you be opposite them or...??
work out a sense of direction As they say, you can only walk (stumble in this case) in one direction //insert music//
stumbling and tripping for majority of the trip.Tripping for majority of the trip. Ohkay
( ... )
i AM AWFULLY SORRY BUT CHII WANTED FIRST SPOT SO--- <333 forgive me lol. didn't you know, commas and i are in an open relationship hAHAHAH. BUT YEAH I NEEDA FIX ON THEM ORZ. THANKS CHIBI.
thanks for reading it through, and actually taking time to post a comment. q u q
AHHHH SCREAMSSSSSSS ;_____________; how could you say that this is plotless omg?!?!?! ;;AAAAA;; i loved it!!!!!!!! this was so tense and tender and steamy and omg i'm so honored you dedicated this to me v//////////v thank you so much for this gem <333
LAUREN ; AAAAAAAAAAAAAA ; Sobs hi I am so happy that you took the time to read this, since you are the one who got me into Suchen ;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;; It is pretty plotless u _______ u i could write something more, like a back story or a sequel to make it have more backbone. but alas. /is drowning in assignments & homework.
it is an honour for you to read this sobseuu u v u <3333 hopefully, there will be more suchen stories in the future for me ehehehe e u e <3333
O wow sobs thanks so much for the comment?????? Like it really means a lot to me ;;;;;
I know I know, I think I kinda broke myself as well in the process of writing it. And oui, Jundae is a match made in heaven omg they are absolutely adorable and give me too many feels :|
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ahem.
strolls into spot all dignified, cup of hazelnut latte in hand and fic open before me. sits in seiza position, sips.
silence.
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ok now that that's done.
clambering down the stairs with haphazardly before stumbling towards the door
days were endless with soft touches and nights, were spent kissing languidly under the stars.
Although we haven’t seen each other in year, this is just plain awkward
lower back aching with a dull thud.
did you proofread at ALL?
He promises, later, to never fall in love again in the hopes of avoiding such feelings, feelings that feel like his heart is going to be ripped into pieces. It’s better for everyone, he concludes bitterly, especially for me.
Can I just say!! I really like it when people write rambling kind of breakdowns like this because it helps convey the point of HEART AND EMOTION and I don't know what my point is anymore -
“I-I think what I am trying to say is I love you, and that I never stopped loving you.”
I'm meant to be the chii(sy) one but I think this label should be bestowed upon you instead
The lack of ( ... )
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dID YOU KNOW THAT I HAVE AN AMAZING ABILITY THAT WHEN I ADD SOMETHING EXTRA INTO A STORY, IT TURNS INTO SOMETHING STUFFED UP. THE PAINS OF BEING ME ;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;
aw aw aw. thanks for sticking with this...cheesy thing idek. though, your angsty ways are influencing me, bECAUSE LOOK AT THE TRAUMATIC [OK NOT THAT TRAUMATIC] PAIN I MADE CHEN CHEN GO THROUGH HAHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAH.
sobs. my writing is nowhere near great. you have to teach me your ways senpai <3333
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[edit: uhlim <333]
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Ah well, as they say: It’s the new beginning of a new day, and the start of a new story //laughs and rolls off (Hardly relevant but I had an urge to ctrl+p it in)
He leans back down to level himself so that he is face to face next to the younger.
Duuuude, if you're face to face wouldn't you be opposite them or...??
work out a sense of direction
As they say, you can only walk (stumble in this case) in one direction //insert music//
stumbling and tripping for majority of the trip.Tripping for majority of the trip. Ohkay ( ... )
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didn't you know, commas and i are in an open relationship hAHAHAH. BUT YEAH I NEEDA FIX ON THEM ORZ. THANKS CHIBI.
thanks for reading it through, and actually taking time to post a comment. q u q
<3333
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how could you say that this is plotless omg?!?!?!
;;AAAAA;; i loved it!!!!!!!! this was so tense and tender and steamy and
omg i'm so honored you dedicated this to me v//////////v
thank you so much for this gem <333
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; AAAAAAAAAAAAAA ;
Sobs hi I am so happy that you took the time to read this, since you are the one who got me into Suchen ;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;
It is pretty plotless u _______ u i could write something more, like a back story or a sequel to make it have more backbone. but alas. /is drowning in assignments & homework.
it is an honour for you to read this sobseuu u v u <3333 hopefully, there will be more suchen stories in the future for me ehehehe e u e <3333
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you've written this so well TT__TT the starting and ending just fit so perfectly, JUST LIKE JUNMYEON AND JONGDAE AYYYYYYYYYAAAHHHH
kjhkjfe perfect~ this is just so sweet, and so lovely uggghhhh good job author-nim~
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I know I know, I think I kinda broke myself as well in the process of writing it. And oui, Jundae is a match made in heaven omg they are absolutely adorable and give me too many feels :|
thank you again darl!!!!!!!
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