FIC: We Fat Ourselves For Maggots

[visszater]

Title: We Fat Ourselves For Maggots
Author: vissy
Fandom: Death Note
Pairing: Ryuuku/Raito. Sort of.
Summary: Ryuuku watches over his family.
Spoilers: I've read up to part 32.
Rating: R
Disclaimer: These characters are the intellectual property of Ooba Tsugumi and Obata Takeshi. I intend no copyright infringement and make no money.
Notes: Written for shanalle'

Comments

[applekid]

Brilliant. Fucking brilliant.

[silveria]

That's awesome. It really fits the realistic/dark tones the manga set, though you take it a step further. Really nice effect...and of course I am still a Ryuuku and Raito fan, so seeing this "sort of" between them is a pleasant surprise. You pulled it off brilliantly, if I may steal rifurein's choice of words. ;) Truly...

[firedraygon97]

YES, Ryuuku! We get to see how his brain works for a night. This is genius, and I love all the undertones. Awesome work.

[keraha]

This is amazing. Ryuuku is such a nonentity in Death Note (er, of what I've read and remembered) and seeing one night in his eyes is.... waugh. The small, lyrical details in how the Yagamis sleep and Ryuuku's eyes and the semi sound effects work together so well. The sheer creepiness should make it something slightly disturbing, but it's that and more to the point where it's just plain gorgeous. *much love*

[kidinair]

I love this. I love the calmness of it, even though Ryuuku is floating around, butting into Raito's private space (watching Raito sweat over a dream, even L doesn't get to see that kind of vulnerability). That leg episode, that is fantastic. The barrier that it breaches is wow, and Ryuuku doesn't even seem to understand it. Your writing's mad, do more. :)