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[biglar]

your septum piercing looks good

i liked the poem

[ericana]

i miss you and i dont know whats going on and i hope you're okay and i hope you know i will always always always be here for you (you should move in in september) i miss you i love you call me.
-erica-

[coeursommeil__]

that poem is spectacular.

[ville_de_morte]

send me those pictures of us.
i love you.

[lowlywoodcutter]

this is pretty interesting. i'm relieved to see that the speaker's vision of innocence and wonder involve sex, violence, "reality." and i'm also relieved to see that he's just waiting for wonder, something new, not the blanket of lame unfurled over society. i'm always relieved when people acknowledge that about life. Then again, this poem is hard to pin down since all the thigns the speaker is "waiting for" don't always quite unify. is he waiting for more american shit to hit the fan, or is he hopeful for the new & good discoveries?

i guess this is an obvious question, but do you think the beat poets are at all dated?