Comments | vm_summer: Chapter 18: Pimp My Ride

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Chapter 18: Pimp My Ride

Oct 21, 2006 20:34

Title: All Fall Down
Pairing / Character: Veronica/Logan, Keith
Rating: PG-13 to R
Words: 140,237
Summary: In Neptune, the brighter the summer sun, the deeper the shadows.
Spoilers / Warnings: Seasons 1 and 2 / Language and adult situations
Chapter 18: Pimp My Ride
Author: sarah_p
Additional Characters: Lamb, John Enbom, Caz Truman, Dick, Corny
Rating: PG ( Read more... )

keith, john enbom, dick, corny, veronica, sarah_p, all fall down, logan, caz truman, lamb

Comments 38

perfect__weapon October 22 2006, 16:57:08 UTC

I hadn't even looked at who was the author or this lovely chapter and when it came down to the unicorns and GI Joes I knew it was Sarah_P haha :) Ugh. I loved this very much & it was totally believable for a rich brat to ruin a car because they got one that wasn't blue. I loved the who Dick, Logan, Veronica interaction. Great chapter.

sarah_p October 23 2006, 05:21:01 UTC

HEE. It's good to know that I have my fic trademark! I mean, I need to stick to what I know, right? :)

It's so good to hear that this chapter worked for you! Trying to encapsule the spoiler rottenness of the 09ers was difficult, so hearing "rich brat" means I did something right :). And, dude, Dick is LOVE, and I will never, ever tire of trying to find random places to insert him. And..that wasn't supposed to come out as dirty as it did. HEE.

Thanks so much for reading and commenting! Only four chapters left. Eeeeh! :)

soundofsett1ing October 22 2006, 17:27:58 UTC

I dont usually leave too much fb on fics and stuff but this was just really good with all the toys and stuff so I had to let you know how much I liked it thanks so much for posting this it is fabulous.

sarah_p October 23 2006, 05:24:55 UTC

Thank YOU for taking the time to comment on it! And, hee, toys are my strange fic PASSION, so I'm glad you enjoyed them :).

Thanks again for reading :).

shinysylver October 23 2006, 03:29:37 UTC

I totally loved Logan defending Dick to Veronica. They are so BFF. *tear*

I thought this chapter was particularly smooth. The integration of the MotW and Veronica's relationship with Logan was very well done. I was glad that we got some non case related talking and bantering. It felt very well balanced.

Finally, I totally don't trust Tallulah because A) Veronica likes her too much for very little reason, B)She is friends with all the bad guys, C)Logan doesn't like her, D) She's rich in Neptune, and E) She keeps showing up. I may be falling for a red herring but I haven't trusted her from the start and thought I would bring it up again.

sarah_p October 24 2006, 12:22:57 UTC

Can I tell you how happy this comment makes me? SO happy. I was concerned with the huge amount of dialogue in this chapter, and I wasn't sure if it added to or hurt the mystery, so to hear "smooth" and "balanced" out of all of this makes me GIDDY, since that's what I was trying for. Yay! It was nice to get a fluff chapter, so Logan and Veronica could finally have SOME fun, and a light case helped them be not SO OMGWRAPPEDUP in it.

And, dude, ICON. Logan and Dick SO ARE BFF. *loves them*

I may be falling for a red herring but I haven't trusted her from the start and thought I would bring it up again.

*makes marks in a little notebook* Duly noted! Now we shall see what happens... :)

Thank you so, so much reading and letting me know what you thought. Yay! :)

hugecerealbox October 23 2006, 05:02:23 UTC

Whee, new chapter! I knew it was coming but STILL; my favorite thing about sunday mornings! So this was a fun chapter to balance out the darkness of the last few. Although the angst with Lamb was well done.

But my all-time fav thing about this episode/chapter/thing? Gotta be the GI Joe and My Little Pony reference! Sarah, that remains my favorite thing you've ever written (this was good too ofcourse!).

sarah_p October 24 2006, 12:25:57 UTC

This was definitely one of the fluff chapters amidst the dark, so I'm glad it worked for you. Cause, heh, I don't do angst so well ;).

AND G.I. JOES AND MLP! HEE! Somehow, that's what my writing all comes back to ;).

Sarah, that remains my favorite thing you've ever written

Awww, thank you :). I have to admit, as my first fic in the fandom EVER, I really have a soft spot in my heart for the MLP/G.I. Joe goodness. It's nice to know others share that random love :).

Thank you for reeeeading! :)

la623 October 23 2006, 06:15:12 UTC

LOL...this was sooo good...the last couple of lines were hilarious! Can't wait to read more!

sarah_p October 24 2006, 12:27:22 UTC

Woohoo! That's awesome to hear! And, hee, yeah, poor Logan...I'm pretty sure HE doesn't think it's funny, but come ON.

Thank you so much for reading and commenting! Yay! :)