Comments | vm_summer: Chapter 21: O Father, Where Art Thou?

truemyth in vm_summer

Chapter 21: O Father, Where Art Thou?

Nov 11, 2006 20:47

Title: All Fall Down
Pairing / Character: Veronica/Logan, Keith
Rating: PG-13 to R
Words: 157,250 to date
Summary: In Neptune, the brighter the summer sun, the deeper the shadows.
Spoilers / Warnings: Seasons 1 and 2 / Language and adult situations
Chapter 21: O Father, Where Art Thou?
Author: truemyth
Additional Characters: Back-Up, Cliff, Lamb, Sacks, ( Read more... )

keith, sacks, weevil, chapter 21, back-up, veronica, all fall down, logan, cliff, truemyth, lamb

Comments 44

fickledame November 12 2006, 05:19:48 UTC

“He deserves to be thankful you even looked into this case for him. He needs to realize that your father has been shot at, your mother has been held at gun point, and you have done everything in your power to help those girls. You deserve a fucking rest, not his guilt trip.”

Aw, Logan.

“Veronica, we’ll talk about this later.”

Hee.

Argh, you can't keep having Keith cliffhangers! Baaad!

Great chapter. I look forward to the conclusion!

truemyth November 12 2006, 17:39:08 UTC

You can't keep having Keith cliffhangers!
Rob started it!

Thanks so much for reading, Jade. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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truemyth November 12 2006, 17:40:51 UTC

Veronica telling him that his tracker was working just fine made me laugh a lot.
Hee. I'm glad you liked it because it makes me giggle too.

Yes, we set up a pretty dark little mystery here. I'm glad you liked the chapter.

starxd_sparrow November 12 2006, 06:13:41 UTC

Wow... wonderful. I have in icky feeling at the pit of my stomach... but I guess that means I'll just have to wait until next Saturday with baited breath.

Can't wait for the next one!

truemyth November 12 2006, 17:41:35 UTC

I'm glad you liked the chapter and I can't wait for the next one either!

shinysylver November 12 2006, 06:25:06 UTC

I was so right about John! About how he wanted Colleen to have all of the surgeries so that she would look young and slight. I was also right about Tallulah. My mind is totally twisted enough to catch the clues in this story.

Anyway, I am kinda mad at Keith in this fic. Lying to Veronica, shutting Veronica out, hurting Lamb in a rather dumb move, and now going down there with so little plan/backup. I don't want him to die and I am really feeling for V but I really need him to come to some senses.

Keep up the good work!

truemyth November 12 2006, 17:44:09 UTC

You get the "All Fall Down" gold star! Seriously, it's great to know that we constructed the story well enough that it makes sense and that a few people predicted it, and yet others have been surprised. It's hard work to plot a mystery and gratifying when it sounds like you've done it well.

Yeah, well... Keith can act a bit immaturely himself from time to time. As we learned in this last episode of Season 3, right? He and Veronica are a lot alike.

Thanks for reading!

berry_hearts November 12 2006, 07:24:20 UTC

GAH! Talk about a cliffhanger. That's so gross:
A) Pussy letting herself be called Pussy
B) The brothel of children

I did like the tracer and the lamb interaction. Yay Keith!

truemyth November 12 2006, 17:45:35 UTC

Yay! We are gross! Heh. I hope it wasn't too much for you.

I'm so glad to hear you liked my Lamb since I'm never that comfortable writing him.