After 'The End'

Feb 08, 2004 20:30

Cara had been walking for a long time ( Read more... )

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zunger February 8 2004, 22:04:38 UTC
You know, that is a very disturbing ending to the story...

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Re: vmurther February 8 2004, 22:06:18 UTC

It's appropriate, I thought.

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Re: zunger February 8 2004, 22:10:26 UTC
Oh, quite definitely. And I like it. It's disturbing nonetheless.

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Re: gaaneden February 8 2004, 22:11:56 UTC
If you notice, this is not the end of Cara. Death is only the beginning of a new level. I don't see her giving up anytime soon. What a wonderful and disturbing story for after her end.

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gaaneden February 8 2004, 22:10:32 UTC
Thank you. You have captured her essence in a way I did not realize anyone else who did not play her could have. Your description of her death, her acceptance and the moment between she and Michael was absolutely amazing.

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Re: vmurther February 8 2004, 22:11:52 UTC

I bow to your compliments. Thank you for providing the material for this piece... it couldn't have happened without Cara.

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hansandersen February 8 2004, 22:51:19 UTC
There is a thin and fatal line that confronts any who would seek understanding. The more insistently you seek, the closer you draw yourself towards that line, no more than a single horsehair glimmering in the half-light. The trick is to know exactly how far to reach, how much to question, how much to understand. And when you've reached the line, when it's so close that your very breath might snap it in two, you must be willing to turn around and walk away, and be content with what you have done and what little you understand.

Deep in his heart, Michael understood that. But Cara... Always she questioned, wanting to learn more, heedlessly plunging into the places where there was no light, where she could not see that thin and fatal line stretched across the corridor before her.

Somewhere in the heavens, Dionysius is laughing.

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cheshirrrecat February 9 2004, 10:26:54 UTC
Incredible, as Always. i Love the description of how she died. Perfect.

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stealthymonkey February 9 2004, 12:28:19 UTC
where, pray tell, doe sone go to read this (these?) stories from the get?

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Re: vmurther February 9 2004, 13:10:23 UTC

this particular entry is a capstone to a game session, so no online record of this story exists. Having run the game, I have copious notes, but the general distinction of this entry was that when the game ended, all of the characters had a sort of conclusion... Cara, having died much earlier (due to player leaving the area, largely), never got her 'epilogue'.
This is the epilogue.

Previous entries (Martin and Alice, Marion and Isabella, Andreas and Harvey) are related to the game setting, but not quite so much with the game session itself, and more of them will probably follow here.

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Re: ttall February 9 2004, 14:50:14 UTC
I was wondering where Cara fit in with them. Thought provoking piece. Though, I still await the return of the others.

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