New Song: Feedback Requested

[voiceofkiki]

So the lyrics are still a work in progress.  They still need to be cleaned up a bit.  Constructive suggestions welcome.

“Priest”

TTTO: “Creep” by Radiohead

When we burst through the door

I saw to my surprise

A round limbless creature

With hundreds of eyes

Float o'er a battalion

Of orcs and undead

Warrior preps his special

They all prep their

Comments

[partiallyclips]

Woo! That is really quite a brilliant parody, Kiki. I might have to perform that at some point, with your permission of course.

[insane_ian]

Excellent stuff! Well done!

[tomreedtoon]

A few years ago, when I was still heavily into RPG's, I wrote a parody of "Waiting for the Robert E. Lee" about a warrior dragging around his severed leg, looking for a priest of Ilmater to heal him. I think the chorus went:

(And so you) See me hop-ping a-long
See me hop-ping a-long
It's real-ly pain-ful, shame-ful,
My leg's in my back-pack
It's wrapped in a ruck-sack

You can see me hop-ping a-long
A wail of pain is my song
It is-n't great, mate
Sit-ting in the tem-ple,
Wait-ing for Il-mat-er's good priest!

I won't trouble you with my Wizard of Oz parody, "If I Only Had A Sword."

[stevemb]

I've been in games like that....

Love it!

[emiofbrie]

Record it!! :)