Cut the cards, cut the deck

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Comments

[muchtooarrogant]

This was so much fun. A normal enough start, and then everything starts to fall apart--well, into the basement. *grin* Well done.

Dan

[bleodswean]

Fun stuff! Peppered with a dry humour. Nice!

[alycewilson]

Thar was intense but worth it. I thought at first it was the spirit of the dead tree, angry at being removed. Your ending is better.

[adoptedwriter]

This was a fun read...Kinda like watching "My Haunted House"! I was hooked from the start! AW

[sinnamongirl]

Did I not comment on this? I dropped the ball. Great story! I like how sneaky (this is totally a compliment, I've got a headache and can't think of a better word... subtle maybe?) you were about getting the prompt in there with 'cut the deck'! Very good job.