I was afraid I was making him too evil; I think the writers on both shows have been trying to evolve his character. But man, when he first showed up, he was so weaselly, and that was the version I used here.
Thanks! I had the greatest fun in writing this when I was going back through the episodes and figuring out what and when would each character's feelings have changed.
Then they noticed how they were all leaning on each other on the one couch, and started thinking.
You realize you must write a follow-up now? You could even use the same structure. Maybe them falling into (and sometimes out of) a relationship. I could work! *hopes liek woah*
I know I want to rehaul this fic sometime (hopefully get a beta!). I kind of like ending it here, with the realization that Woolsey may just have had a point.
Really enjoyed this. I love the structure of the story, and all three POVs were wonderful. I have to admit, I especially loved Teyla's POV. I adore her!
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You realize you must write a follow-up now? You could even use the same structure. Maybe them falling into (and sometimes out of) a relationship. I could work! *hopes liek woah*
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I know I want to rehaul this fic sometime (hopefully get a beta!). I kind of like ending it here, with the realization that Woolsey may just have had a point.
But a follow-up fic...mmm...
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I'm glad you liked! Thanks for commenting!
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