I'm more a slash reader too, but lately I've really gotten into team OT4s. That was the biggest problem for me in writing this, I felt sorry for Ronon for being left out.
Lovely scenario and structure, and a great, ironic (and lovely sweet) ending. All three were perfectly on and great in their differnt reactions to Woolsey.
Ooh, I like the structure here very much. (And I enjoyed the characterization and your brisk, pleasant writing style, and how grounded in canon your writing comes across as, but I really like the back-and-forth structure).
Using my OT4 icon so Ronon doesn't feel left out, per your comment above. ::g::
I'm so glad the structure worked for you! I was afraid it might be a bit too abrupt between the different sections.
And I enjoyed the characterization and your brisk, pleasant writing style, and how grounded in canon your writing comes across as
:D Thank you!
Seriously, I couldn't get anywhere for the longest time because of Ronon. "Well, maybe he's sick, and didn't go on that mission? Yeah right. He would sneak through the gate and catch up with them on the planet, armed with tissues."
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Hmm, love this dynamic! Love Teyla's voice and her interaction with Woosely. Love all the little bits and pieces!
Great characterisation and just so enjoyable to read. Thank you for sharing :)
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Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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Thank you!
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Using my OT4 icon so Ronon doesn't feel left out, per your comment above. ::g::
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And I enjoyed the characterization and your brisk, pleasant writing style, and how grounded in canon your writing comes across as
:D Thank you!
Seriously, I couldn't get anywhere for the longest time because of Ronon. "Well, maybe he's sick, and didn't go on that mission? Yeah right. He would sneak through the gate and catch up with them on the planet, armed with tissues."
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