mistletoe fic

Dec 09, 2006 02:45

This is just more proof that I fail at deadlines. But it's done!

Title: Love in Three Parts
Fandom: SGA, John/Teyla/Rodney

Set during Misbegotten.

fic! )

sga, fic

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mcalex22 December 9 2006, 15:14:49 UTC
Lovely story! I read quite a bit of slash but I just adore threesome pairings, be it J & R with Elizabeth, Sam, Radek, Carson....

Hmm, love this dynamic! Love Teyla's voice and her interaction with Woosely. Love all the little bits and pieces!

Great characterisation and just so enjoyable to read. Thank you for sharing :)

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volari December 9 2006, 18:30:53 UTC
I'm more a slash reader too, but lately I've really gotten into team OT4s. That was the biggest problem for me in writing this, I felt sorry for Ronon for being left out.

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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cathexys December 9 2006, 15:34:16 UTC
Lovely scenario and structure, and a great, ironic (and lovely sweet) ending. All three were perfectly on and great in their differnt reactions to Woolsey.

Thank you!

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volari December 9 2006, 18:33:38 UTC
Ah, thank you so much!

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shara50 December 9 2006, 16:42:13 UTC
That was a very lovely story, thank you.

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volari December 9 2006, 18:34:39 UTC
::blush:: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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panisdead December 9 2006, 19:40:08 UTC
Ooh, I like the structure here very much. (And I enjoyed the characterization and your brisk, pleasant writing style, and how grounded in canon your writing comes across as, but I really like the back-and-forth structure).

Using my OT4 icon so Ronon doesn't feel left out, per your comment above. ::g::

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volari December 11 2006, 19:54:41 UTC
I'm so glad the structure worked for you! I was afraid it might be a bit too abrupt between the different sections.

And I enjoyed the characterization and your brisk, pleasant writing style, and how grounded in canon your writing comes across as

:D Thank you!

Seriously, I couldn't get anywhere for the longest time because of Ronon. "Well, maybe he's sick, and didn't go on that mission? Yeah right. He would sneak through the gate and catch up with them on the planet, armed with tissues."

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ceares December 9 2006, 21:27:09 UTC
Loved the format and the falling in and out of love scenario-it really fits them.

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volari December 11 2006, 19:55:03 UTC
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed!

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