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Jan 30, 2007 20:11

Lys has a fanfic! :D

Title: Outside the City
Series: Tales of the Abyss
Characters: Young!Jade and Dist
Rating: PG-13 (a bit of graphic stuff)
Summary: Curious little Saphir follows Jade out of Keterburg after dark.
Notes: Quick fanfic. I just wanted to write about how creepy little!Jade was. Of course I have to put Saphir in there too, or else ( Read more... )

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vyctori January 31 2007, 03:40:50 UTC
...Hoo boy. You do a really good creepy little!Jade. The ending made my stomach go a bit wonky right along with poor Saphir's.

As for posting it on the comm, y. Pimpin' is good, yo.

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sullmaster January 31 2007, 03:52:41 UTC
Awesome Lys, I love how you set up the atmosphere with the description of the footprints in the snow. Really added to the scene you were trying to portray, very creepy. Great job so far, keep it up!

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bolshevists January 31 2007, 04:18:18 UTC
Brilliant! :D I found it highly amusing, in a kinda cute kind of way. But overall, just wonderful :3

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queenie_z January 31 2007, 04:20:28 UTC
A+ creepyfic, would go HOLY JEEBUS again.

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downburst January 31 2007, 04:51:13 UTC
asldkjfh ♥!!!!!!

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