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chang_hen_ge September 6 2011, 20:28:59 UTC
Oh my heart! Gorgeousness loveliness, with the ache of secondhand embarrassment and shame coming at the Porc. But yeay for romantic endings!! Seriously lovely, huge awwwwwws just coming out from me at the end. Thank you

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leladancer18 September 6 2011, 22:19:26 UTC
Oh, I'm grinning so much. Such a lovely story.:D

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novelized September 6 2011, 23:57:47 UTC
opekopjkdojg so good. YOU ARE SO GOOD. <333 loved loved loved this.

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astro_frog5 September 7 2011, 01:22:05 UTC
Yay! I love the movie framing even more now that I've seen it going all the way through - that was such a great idea!

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treelines September 7 2011, 01:46:15 UTC
My heart! I loved how quietly we are shown that Mark has always been a beautiful human being in this story. He is so gorgeous, and earnest in a soft, Mark way. He wanted to do well. THAT KILLS ME. Oo, and it's so nice to have Eduardo's POV at the end because after the movie, we know just how much final clubs mean to Mark, so being able to fill that emotional puzzle piece in myself as a reader made it even more fulfilling. I love the idea that Mark shines so brightly at the 20-person dinner. I love that he uses his newfound powers for good. Oof. I love when writers give Mark something other than thefacebook to pour himself into. I love reading what his energies can do.

And then!!!

I wasn’t expecting you to make me laugh and impress me and be this completely fascinating guy that I couldn’t wait to spend time with. I didn’t know that you were all these good things that you are [...] you’re a person. Suits and table manners and social skills be damned. You’re this smart person with this dry sense of humor that most people don’t get, and ( ... )

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