Comments | warmboys: Proof of Bullets (part 2)

warmboys

Proof of Bullets (part 2)

May 25, 2011 12:20

Proof of Bullets
Onew/Jonghyun
~12000 words
NC-17

( (part 2) Jonghyun sucks )

shinee: c: onew, other: c: mc jake, c.n.blue: c: yonghwa, x-over: p: jessica/jonghyun, yg: c: cl, shinee: p: minho/onew, snsd: c: jessica, shinee: p: jonghyun/onew, fandom: shinee, x-over: p: cl/onew, shinee: c: jonghyun, shinee: c: minho

Comments 91

kantamu May 25 2011, 17:34:24 UTC

ksdjgkdsjgksdjgsd

Aghhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.

I really liked this. And um, may be back more to say something later.

warmboys May 25 2011, 20:25:30 UTC

so glad you liked it! \o/ thanks a lot :)

spot mariposa02 May 25 2011, 17:45:26 UTC

yay 12 k+ w. of Jongyu!!

Re: spot warmboys May 25 2011, 22:02:13 UTC

yesss XDDD;; take your time!

Re: spot mariposa02 May 26 2011, 16:44:26 UTC

this is great .. like how you expressed their feelings and how their relationship developed. I really really love this fic :D

Re: spot warmboys May 26 2011, 16:49:55 UTC

so glad it worked for you! thanks a lot ♥

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warmboys May 25 2011, 21:53:13 UTC

thanks for the mem! glad it worked for you :)

tokyospine May 25 2011, 19:31:39 UTC

basically. ha, hrm. uh. buh.

everything you write is pure gold. but in musical world, you're platinum. :] gold-plated platinum? idk, that's pretty ugly. anyway, obviously, i mean - i don't read slash unless it's recommended by you or written by you, and i pretty much got what i expected. oh, YOU. ♥ maybe it's because i haven't seen anything from you in a while, but reading this sounds like you've improved (not that you were bad!) and like, are you sure you don't want to write for a living?

*----* jfc, 12,000 words. idk how you do it but you do and i am impressed and in awe. ♥

warmboys May 25 2011, 21:58:34 UTC

awwwww :3 I'm happy/relieved you think I've improved @__@ funny how writing fic seems to involve a muscle that degenerates with disuse... this was tough. ugh, I wouldn't want to write for a living (read: who would WANT me to write for a living lmao) but it'd be great to write one awesome book every decade or so. haha. x_x /dreams

anyone can do it! I feel like this could've been better had I not rushed it but after a while I felt like a parent waiting for her kid to grow up a la a chia pet

starlitbright May 26 2011, 00:16:43 UTC

(read: who would WANT me to write for a living lmao)

Excuse me, me?

warmboys May 26 2011, 21:03:31 UTC

you're like my very own maraschino cherry :)

caitlinonkey May 25 2011, 20:35:33 UTC

Fuck this is amazing
just wow
wow
wow

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warmboys May 25 2011, 22:01:47 UTC

what a sweet comment omg ♥ I'm embarrassed hahahaha

thanks so much! I love knowing what people enjoyed, and I'm glad those moments worked for you :D I had a hard time making that transition from friends to more than friends so it's a relief to hear you liked the story nonetheless :) haha I love you too! you are too sweet ♥