LJIdol, Week 3: Brushback Pitch

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Batter up

Comments

[eternal_ot]

Heh! I loved the last lines. A nice take :)

[rswndrlst]

awesome! I'm always glad to see poetry entries and this has a great nostalgic feeling of "the old ball game" but since it's poetry it could also be a metaphor for standing up to a bully and owning the spotlight instead of backing down.

Well done

[rayaso]

This was so much fun! You did a great job. I agree -- it does sound old-fashioned.

[magazhchi]

Amazing take! Loved it.

[sinnamongirl]

Thank you for your entry!