Cuppa angst for your Monday?

May 15, 2011 21:31

A trifle from the Far From Home series, that I really, really, want to get back to this summer. And I entirely blame the angst on the nursery rhyme. What was the poor writer to do?

Title: Whither Do I Wander
Author: Elderberry Wine
Pairing: F/S, M/P
Rating: PG
Word Count: 1651
Summary: A sudden and tragic event causes reassessment on the part of ( Read more... )

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lavendertook June 1 2011, 02:45:18 UTC
You caught the different points of view wonderfully. You use the rhyme to structure this beautifully. Our poor hobbits.

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elderberrywine July 10 2011, 18:36:52 UTC
*is soooo embarrassed*

Sorry to be so late in responding to your lovely comment! Thank you very much, especially on the structure. I come from more of a music than a writing background, and this poem just seemed so right to work with.

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frodosweetstuff June 2 2011, 11:58:35 UTC
Oooooh angsty and what with all the sadness still ahead! *sniffles* But very well-written and great use of that rhyme. Thank you!

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elderberrywine July 10 2011, 18:39:55 UTC
*gives you a twirl*

Thank you sooo much, and *embarrassed cough* so sorry to be late on replying to you. Once they leave Rivendell, it's Angst City from there on out for them, I'm afraid. (But would we love them so much if that weren't the case? Hmmmm...)

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elanorfairbairn July 10 2011, 14:25:13 UTC
It's great to have some time to visit Waymeet and find more far from home! Thank you for another beautiful installment.

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elderberrywine July 10 2011, 18:43:17 UTC
And what timing you have, my dear! I'm afraid to admit I have half-written stuff in every series I've ever started, and writing this piece made me go back to the one I had for Far From Home. So, actually, you should see a new bit popping up on my journal in a few hours. Glad to see it's remembered fondly. *delighted grin*

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