Good story teller… Shite at grammar

[webmonkeyjr]

So my friend Heather has been polite enough to edit the first three chapters of the novel for me. On one hand the comments and edits are completely valid and will help. On the other hand, the part of me that is emotionally attached to the story is a little heart broken, because I feel like I’ve let the readers of it suffer for my poor use of

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[gm_ilanya]

I just want to say I'm very proud of you for doing this. I wish I had the time commitment you do. So remember, as much as you get down on yourself about it, you're still doing a great thing.

[nytewatchyr]

Did I post here? I don't know. I'm sorry... I've been bombarded by work (believe it or not I actually have to meet with high up gov't people TWICE this week!! What's up with that!!??) Anyways... I'm the slow one reading... and I love the plot... I have grammar suggestions and stuff but that all needs to be shown in person.... I also have bronchitis again so if there is snot on your pages... well... blame it on Star