drifters ( woohyun x sunggyu, pg-13 ) - part 3.

[wemustreinvent]

link to part 1 and 2

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just as promised, he goes to visit sunggyu again the following night. he’s still sick but he’s looking a little less so, which makes woohyun happy; he takes over some leftover bibimbap he had made for dinner that evening and once again buys a hot chocolate from the coffee shop before making his way there. sunggyu definitely

Comments

[mamachine]

this... is absolutely beautiful ;; amazingly written, and heartbreakingly perfect.
gAH this is just so lovely and yet bittersweet and i'm very emotional over this omg orz i just really love it!!!!

thank you so much for sharing this♥

[wemustreinvent]

oh my so fast ;u; thank you so much for reading it and I'm so glad you liked it ;u; ♥

[spacecaadet]

ouch my heart hurts. ouch.

But it was so beautiful and fjrefkergfe good job at the writing!

[wemustreinvent]

thank you for reading! I'm so glad you liked it. :)

[eonjekkaji]

I like how woohyun rediscovered himself after meeting and falling in love with sunggyu, and how sunggyu remaining his cheery self despite everything that has happened to him. While their interests coincide, putting together two opposites is always nice. Sunggyu hurts me so much but thank you for writing!

[wemustreinvent]

thank you for commenting. :3 I didn't want there to be a life-changing meeting with sunggyu because that would be unrealistic and woohyun is really not that dramatic. but I wanted there to be a subtle kind of realisation that was starting to embed itself within woohyun, the kind of change that happens when you meet a person you like and you want to be more like them.

and yeah, I know what you mean. they're both similar but somehow different, and even as the author I don't know how that happened. haha. but I think it works because woohyun and sunggyu are just so drawn into the other.

thank you for reading, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[goodbyethankyou]

I actually really like this.

As dark and depressing as it sounds, I like this dystopic version of the world you presented. For the most part probably because I agree with so much of it. The idea of drifting in and out of life, of love, of the happenings of every day life is something that I've pondered over for as long as I can remember. So I guess that's why I feel that what both Woohyun and Sunggyu did, letting go, was the right thing to do. To conform when they have both already drifted, because of their own selfish reasons to avoid punishment. But who ever said that human desires were a moral sin? Who is to say that they ARE moral sins?

I really like this story. It's really thought-invoking, and probably so for many people who've never considered this aspect of the world. Thanks so much for writing it, and beautifully at that. :)

"because this world is fucked up and wants to control emotions and punish nature for problems with nurture."
This was mt favourite quote :')

[wemustreinvent]

thank you so much for this lovely comment. c:

I'm so glad you liked it and that you understood what I was trying to say with this. not giving woohyun and sunggyu their happy endings was, as mean as it sounds, the only way I was going to end this. I think it would be far less real had they been brave enough and selfless enough to go along with it. the most important thing to me, even with the dystopic nature of this, was that it felt real, and I'm glad you understood the messages I tried to put in there.

thank you. c: