Comments | wh_mermaid: I'd like to be free like that, spread my wings so high

wh_mermaid

I'd like to be free like that, spread my wings so high

Dec 26, 2011 21:13

Title: I’d like to be free like that, spread my wings so high
Pairing: Carlos Marchena/Raul Albiol, hinted Villa/Silva
Word Count: 3205
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Not true
Summary: Carlos notices Raul for the first time when he’s seventeen and as the years pass, still can’t bring himself to make a move. Fluff warning. Written for snowstranger for the fblslash ( Read more... )

carlos marchena, raul albiol, fic

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wh_mermaid December 28 2011, 18:10:47 UTC

Thank you! I love snarky Villa too kekekeke <3

allezlesgones December 27 2011, 07:17:07 UTC

this is so amazing. the writing, the story line, all of it. really really well done :) x

wh_mermaid December 28 2011, 18:11:00 UTC

Thank you <3

justkisa December 27 2011, 12:26:15 UTC

adorable!

wh_mermaid December 28 2011, 18:12:03 UTC

lol this pairing. I was so like ".... okay, I can write Raul but how the hell am I supposed to write Marchena????". Glad that it turned out okay

<3333

freakmejc128 December 28 2011, 05:04:40 UTC

Yes, I just left an incoherent comment on your other fic, and yes I am totally flailing over this one as well.

SOO CUTE! I am bursting from the wonderful adorableness. And adorable bitchiness.

wh_mermaid December 28 2011, 18:12:21 UTC

:333 thank you <3

guingel December 28 2011, 13:38:20 UTC

oh my god this is the most incredibly adorable thing!! I love Raul Albiol, and you capture his cuteness perfectly! I just want to cuddle him forever. Love it so much! Perfect and squishy and delightful. :)

wh_mermaid December 28 2011, 18:12:56 UTC

He is such a big dumb puppy in my mind. A cuddly puppy <3__<3

thank you for commenting <3