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whatisthis15

Fic: Unscripted Lines 13/13

Jul 20, 2011 10:55

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naya/heather, unscripted lines

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cherrylipsgirl July 20 2011, 11:32:37 UTC

Oooh it's over :( I loved reading your fic, it was amazing. Epilogue now? :)

whatisthis15 July 20 2011, 17:29:31 UTC

Thank you, glad you enjoyed it. And yep, an epilogue is in the making because things weren't exactly rounded off!

zayx July 20 2011, 11:36:37 UTC

Ok, I think it is fair to say that this was amazing and shocking and all kinds of wonderful and that I love you ( ... )

whatisthis15 July 20 2011, 17:36:17 UTC

Phew, thank you very much! Glad you thought it was okay, I've been expecting some hellish backlash because it's not exactly a cheery finish! I'm toying with ideas for a Naya epilogue which should get some closure, but personally felt that a completely official relationship shouldn't happen so easily. In my head if Heather had broken up with Taylor as soon as she wanted to, things would have backfired on her - only because I've made him out to be little evil, harsh I know, but if she left him for Naya in a snap of fingers (in his eyes) I dreamt up that he'd go on an assault to destroy them, but not like bombs or anything which was how that sounded, but like going to the press and stuff! And so sorry for just spilling everything in a comment the size of an essay to you!

Thank you very much for reading, and for all your lovely comments throughout!

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whatisthis15 July 20 2011, 17:37:39 UTC

Thank you, glad you liked it, so worried I was going to be in store for some abuse and the lack of fluff! And yeah, plans for epilogue!

defygravity79 July 20 2011, 14:01:54 UTC

I can't believe it's finished. I can hope for an epilogue? It would definitely deserve one. We'd love you even more!

whatisthis15 July 20 2011, 17:38:28 UTC

Glad you thought it was okay :) And definitely thinking of an epilogue, things aren't quite where they should be!

defygravity79 July 20 2011, 18:14:29 UTC

I can only agree wholeheartedly! It would be awesome. Didn't think Heather's mom would react as she did. But I don't mind. As long as our two lovebirds (aka Romolus & Remus *lol*) get together in the long run!

besmartplaydead July 20 2011, 15:05:15 UTC

I'm sad it's over but the ending was sweet and more than appropriate and I loved how you managed to tie in events from the tour when they were pretty unforeseeable back when you started this. Thanks for introducing me to the world of rpf, haha.

whatisthis15 July 20 2011, 17:40:45 UTC

Thank you very much, I was really torn on the ending, just wasn't feeling a total resolution, things aren't that simple! Thinking of Naya epilogue to tie in with the interlude, thinking it would round it off. And so couldn't miss out that kiss!! Thank you for reading :D