Fic: Unscripted Lines 13/13

[whatisthis15]

 

Comments

[nucleuspolposus]

Thank you so much for writing. It's been an amazing story.
Can't wait for an epilogue!

[whatisthis15]

Thank you very much, glad you liked it :)

[tricaltra]

The way you worked in their actual interactions during the tour was so smartly done. That combined with the ending lent an air of plausibility to the entire story. I have really been impressed with this fic, and while I am sorry to see it end I can't wait for your next writing endeavor.

[whatisthis15]

Wow thank you very much for such a lovely comment :D Glad you enjoyed it!

[anonego_7]

Read this yesterday but phone was not cooperating so couldn't comment.

It was awesome as usual and the weave of fact and speculation was just so perfect. I got halfway and knew you weren't going to end it - well actually I knew you weren't going to before I started because of where they were in RL.

Even without an epilogue, this was a great journey and a beautiful story. You never disappoint :)

[whatisthis15]

Thank you for being so lovely! So pleased you thought it was alright!

[kamokronos]

[whatisthis15]

Thank you very much for such a nice comment! So glad you enjoyed it :D

[cdn_torii]

Oh my goodness! I love supportive!Naya in this. Like a lot. Like her whole part in this final chapter had me smiling from ear to ear. So glad that Heather had that support when she needed it most!!

Are you thinking of a sequel? Or maybe a monologue of Naya's thoughts during this. To think what she was thinking as Heather freaks out inside at Taylor ignoring her request and declaration so much so that he is still draping himself over her??

I love this whole thing though!! Thank you for writing it. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it!!

[whatisthis15]

Glad you liked Naya, and yep got an epilogue going up asap from Naya's perspective which should hopefully tie things up a little more!

Thank you very much for reading and commenting, and thrilled you enjoyed it :)