Another poem for fun

[wheelig]

I should be studying, so I wrote another poem for fun. I have to admit, I didn't work on it for very long. I might go back to it later to finish it and put in some better lines.

What to Wear

I have learned what to wear

Before I tried many outfits to succeed, but I have learned

To put away my platform shoes, and my words;

Layers of modesty, well-

Comments

[divinelybereft]

You know I thought about getting you a Marilyn Manson shirt today. Then I worried about how comfortable you would feel wearing it around Gainsville and then I worried that you would wear it and some asshole religious person would beat you up because of it.

It is interesting because it seems like you are sort of talking about not being able to wear what's on your mind/exciting because it is unacceptable to those who "belong" as you said.

I told Lisa about your "platform" boots. She thought they sounded cool. Can we put this poem in Black Liquid (package 4)? Lisa and I think it would fit very well.

[divinelybereft]

I spelled Gaynesville wrong, I know.

[divinelybereft]

And yet again.

[wheelig]

Plus, I might want to tweak it a little