what i have, i held in these hands (part two)

[whetstone]

what i have, i held in these hands - version two
g-dragon/top
rated r (sexual situations)
part two: 6,206 words
alternate reality. top fails his audition and gives up on yg.

notes: this is a loose remix of gdgdbaby's what i have, i held in these hands. thank you for letting me borrow the idea, lucy. ♥ apologies for any mistakes i made as far as the k-

Comments

[butterflyweb]

*claps hands excitedly*

This is fantastic. Is there more? It feels like there's more. But then that could just be the happy ending whore in me that craves reconciliation and clean slates and happy sex and all that.

I loved Youngbae here, when Seunghyun told him he liked his album, and how he was all brimming with pride, but still trying to include Jiyong in the compliment. And the whole scene of Jiyong's drunkenness and him accusing Top of giving up and the tension between the 'underground' and the 'mainstream' (hip hop sometimes reminds me a lot of punk in that way) and how GD just kept repeating how skinny Seunghyun was and how it wasn't a good thing at all.

I can't be coherent to save my life but yay this and yay you. (You should be locked in a room to write for eternity, and I mean that in the best and least threatening of ways <3)

[whetstone]

:DDD

yes! there are a bunch of scraps that don't fit anywhere that i'll probably put in my wip journal at some point, and then one more 'real part'. ikr? part of me just always wants them to end up happy. ;_;

thank you so much :D it's so weird thinking of a top-less big bang and i was kind of stumped as to how to go about it (which is part of why this took so long, gah) but i'm so glad you liked it. and ikr? i'm not nearly as familiar with hiphop as i am with punk but that whole thing is so interesting, idk.

haha noooo, this comment is great! (and i'm taking that as a compliment, defintely :3 ♥)

[underhand_glory]

i feel like looooooove is honestly the right word for how i feel about this fic. ji getting mad cause he can't make seunghyun mad and how he's simultaneously proud and ashamed of being more successful than seunghyun!!!!!! i liked version one, but this

THIS

there needs to be more fic like this in kpop fandom. i will wait forever for more if i have to happily, happily.

[whetstone]

ahhh thank you!! yeah i feel like their dynamic especially in a verse like this could be like...idek, so many layers to it and how they would work in such a situation. but it's depressing to think about bc that means four member big bang lol. but fjdlskg, i'm rambling. i was really nervous posting this. i was all like man is anyone even going to remember this? haha.

fdljsg oh god thanks! hopefully the next part will come out in way less time than it took to write this one. ♥

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Omg, so fucking good. Written so well and their characters were perfect, especially Jiyong and afsgs!*#^@!.

What is this. I love you.

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Lol sorry, sometimes I can only express my feelings with a gif~

But yes. I loathe AU's & AR's with a fiery passion deep within my soul, but this was so good. It was just really well put together and flowed perfectly and was just awesome and amazing in general : *

[whetstone]

hahaha sigh i've made a mess with my comment deleting, sorry about that. it's okay! thanks for enjoying it even though you're not a fan of aus. :3

[la_geni]

I really, really, really, really like this.

[whetstone]

thank you!

[justflyhigh]

after the original plot and your part one and now part two and maybe part whatever I'm still in love with this, despite the never-happy-ending *cry*
thank you <3

[whetstone]

aw, i'm glad. no, thank you ♥ :)