Comments | whetstone: what i have, i held in these hands (part two)

whetstone

what i have, i held in these hands (part two)

Apr 21, 2011 22:53

what i have, i held in these hands - version two
g-dragon/top
rated r (sexual situations)
part two: 6,206 words
alternate reality. top fails his audition and gives up on yg.

notes: this is a loose remix of gdgdbaby's what i have, i held in these hands. thank you for letting me borrow the idea, lucy. ♥ apologies for any mistakes i made as far as the k- ( Read more... )

!fanfiction, length: chaptered, type: alternate reality, type: romance, fandom: big bang, pairing: gdragon/top

Comments 42

drarryradton May 10 2011, 09:06:38 UTC

ahhh,i finally found your fic again. i wanted to comment, but i was on my mobile, so it didn't work out right.

but anyway! your fic has made me discover that i completely love jiyong liking seunghyun not-that-skinny (since they know each other from before seunghyun became soooo skinny). my heart throbs for that scene :x

thanks for sharing, it was amazing :)

whetstone May 11 2011, 04:47:30 UTC

ah, thank you for taking the time to search and leave a comment. :D i always wonder what gd and yb think of top's whole transformation, so i'm glad you liked it!

you're welcome, i'm happy you enjoyed ♥

agreyn December 8 2011, 01:01:45 UTC

I just wanted to say that this is an amazing story.
I don't like AU usually, but you didn't take music from them and I love it.
Whether or not you write the next part, this is already can be seen as a complete story, just with an open finale, and somehow I feel like good things are waiting for them.

whetstone December 8 2011, 02:46:04 UTC

thank you very much :) i'm happy you enjoyed it even though au isn't your thing normally.

good things should be happening soon! i'd like to finish, but time/motivation are kind of eluding me right now. but i'm glad you enjoy it the way it is right now. thank you again!

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whetstone May 5 2012, 19:46:18 UTC

hey! welcome to bigbang/kpop, haha. sorry it took me so long to reply. thanks so much -- getting the "tone" of their ages right is so hard in a fic like this, so i'm glad it came off all right to you. i'm definitely planning on finishing, it's just...taking quite a while, and i keep changing my mind on where i'd like the story to go.

thanks for reading!!

mini_puff May 23 2015, 16:24:48 UTC

I love love love your story <3 You go up there with my favourite GTOP authors ever T.T I know it's been a long long time and I don't want to be a bother you must have a lot of other things to do with your time but I was wondering if you'll ever continue writing this story. It's one of the best and I wanted to be sure.