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[white_swan]

Agreed that Chloe poem needs revision.

However, she showed me her diary, just for everyone who commented on that :)

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I admire

[dfleming]

That's where fiction comes in handy - you don't have to be faithful to reality. You don't want to have to explain in the poem that she let you read the diary - (I don't think so, anyway).

I admire your emotional honesty in your poetry - very raw, frank, without artifice.

Re: I admire

[white_swan]

I think that is a trademark of what I write -- it is very open and honest without regard to what it will make people think of me. I'm not afraid of being real; everyone else is whether they admit it or not.

Thanks for your comment :)

[rosasmom]

I second what dfleming said. Also, It is refreshing to see a poet that isn't afraid to express what they really feel without worrying about the "angst-haters."
I look forward to seeing more from you.

[white_swan]

Thank you darlin'! Most of my work is very "out there," whether it is vulgar or hard to hear or very honest. I can't write any other way.

[white_swan]

And Zye is a lucky boy.