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[whitelioncub]

Usually things don't get to me, and its been a while since I've been on here because I've been happy ad involved with other parts of my life. However, today I had to do a peer editing for my english class, and this was the paper I had to edit.
We'll just call the author Ana.

Comments

[fritzywolf]

"...feelings can be steered differently." Fuck you bitch! Try to steer me and I'll steer your fucking face into a brick wall!

"an overall damage to society" I'll damage your face with a sledgehammer!!!

"homosexuality is not natural" Ya know what else ain't natural? Your fucking moral conscience!

Okay, now that I've gotten that out of the way, this essay is absurd. The author sets up what she believes to be evidence and accepts it in her defence as solid fact. She uses the opinions of the church to define her twisted definition of "morality" and "natural behavior". This essay is shit, through and through, hell, it's not even well written! Her sentance structure and word choice is deplorable! *Spits on it*

Don't let it get to you cub, *Hugs tight* What you do is only a sin if it crosses your own boundaries of morality.

[whitelioncub]

*hugs* thank you fritzy ^ ^. this essay got to me because I just wasn't expecting anything like it. I was just minding my own business and then along comes this girl with NO idea what its like to actually be gay, and she just says whatever she wants and justifies it by quoting people. I honestly don't think being gay is a sin. Loving other men doesn't make me feel dirty or sick, or leave me with feelings of regret. I just wish other people would just let us be.

[fritzywolf]

Aye, *noddles* if only, 'le sigh. There'll always be enemies, but there'll always be friends ^^ *hugs*

[pawzhusky]

While I do believe that sexual orientation is fluid, some of the things this person says in her essay are either religiously biased, or attempt to give opinionated explanations for what little statistical data is shown.

The way I think about things goes beyond "is it a sin?" and more into questions like "does sin really exist, and what is its true nature if it does exist?", so I can only say that I don't believe that homosexuality is "wrong."

*hugs*

[whitelioncub]

*hugs back* thanks pawzy, I don't think its wrong either.

[dlgrif]

Dr. Cameron agrees that homosexuality is homosexuals are people who are “sexually adventurous or confused”

Therefore, lower incomes can reduce economic status within the homosexual community and society also as well.

According to “most writers on this subject”, they all have...

A third Another religion expressing its stand on homosexuality is the Church of Jesus Christ of Latter Day Saints, stating their beliefs homosexually is strictly a behavior problem, their beliefs regarding homosexuality is “...as follows:

The Church of Jesus Christ of Latter Day Saints does not allow any homosexual activity and immediately banishes these members from out of the church

Revise entire last paragraph, it seems rambling and opinionated.As for me

[whitelioncub]

*nods* you pinned the reasons why I hate it down.

[diaper_dog]

I never felt homosexuality is wrong or a sin, either. Both Pawz and Fritzy make numerous points that I have to agree with.

I feel that the way the data was used in this paper was taken somewhat out of context.

*hugs*

[whitelioncub]

*hugs back* She used whatever she could however she could. It doesn't matter to her =\

[suede_bear]

so youve come to the realization that just because someone is educated, they can still be fucking idiots.

*chuckles*

dont let em get ya down there feline.

[whitelioncub]

They won't keep me down teddy bear, I was just taken by surprise. I just don't understand how people can come up with these things and throw their opinions around and judge people. I guess its because I try not to judge people.