"When the Whole World Is Inside of Your Arms, Wake Up Slow."

[wicked_new_year]

Today on the field trip to the Nassau Community Museum, I had a moment where I thought "Holy shit, this is why I am going to major in art

Comments

[a_cloud_of_fire]

With some key editing, this could absoultely be a college essay. It has a lot of your personality in it, which is what you think your other essays are missing. If you are wondering about it, it would be a good idea to work on it a little more, then bring it to show pip. He digs the creative stuff (from what i've heard), so he would probably be able to give you an honest opinion.

[wicked_new_year]

thanks <33 :)

[pornodisaster]

what a perfect recap.

[wicked_new_year]

thank ya miss chloe.

[silverchipmunk]

This really makes me wish I could have been there...

And I know nothing about college essays. Listen to Lee :P