fic: friction (lie to me)

[wickedandcruel]

Title: Friction

Comments

[barbara_novak]

That was sad but so well written :)

I can see things ending that way in Fold Equity, thanks for sharing!

[wickedandcruel]

I couldn't see it tbh, but after seeing some people's comments b/c of the "shagging the boss" I saw how it could make sense, even if I don't quite agree with lol I still had to write it tho!

[thetinysambo]

Oooh that was good.

You should write the aftermath of Gillian facing Cal in her own room!

[wickedandcruel]

Thank you :)

Yeah I'm considering the possibility, but I don't know how they'd deal with it just yet.

[dark_cygnet]

oh, this was really, really nice. I think you've done a great job of conveying Gillian's thoughts and feelings in this, especially that conflict over the "nice girl" vs being like others in letting control go, whether it's a good reason or not. Comparing Ben to Cal during this just made it all the more real and sad. I enjoyed this and look forward to more from you. Will there be another part?

[wickedandcruel]

Thank you =) I'm glad it seems so. I struggled a little bit b/c i didn't want it to be all about Gillian comparing them, but something that slipped in the moment while she wanted to take some revenge on him lol.

Hmm I'm not sure, like I told the person above, I'm considering the possibility, but I'd have to think first how they'd deal with the issue.

[wickedground]

aw that was sad, bb! :( But well written indeed. So -- sequel? :D

icon!twins :D

[wickedandcruel]

Thank you =) It wasn't my intention to be sad at all, just angsty so I'm tad confused with all the "ooh so sad" comments haha!!

I'm not sure about a sequel. I'm considering it but it's more likely it'll never happen (specially b/c i have another plotbunny that I really need to work on).

It is a pretty icon! :D

[eglvm]

I like it. I actually think it needs a part 2. ;D

[wickedandcruel]

Thanks! I doubt it'll happen, but we'll see ;)