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Aug 17, 2005 23:23

smashing through a brick wall
i never saw coming
sitting in silence
swaying and humming
lost in society
found in a heart
serenity open
and falling apart
mind numbing pain
sigh bringing joy
old blunt blade
new childs toy
future never certain
present just as pleasant
smashing through a brick wall
i never saw coming

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fhqwhg4d5 August 18 2005, 06:56:15 UTC
felipe says your poem is gay!!!

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wideyed_sleeper August 18 2005, 17:54:36 UTC
felipe is gay...

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fhqwhg4d5 August 18 2005, 20:18:55 UTC
and i loves you

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mercyis4thedead August 19 2005, 00:27:06 UTC
Meat...Sandwhich

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malenone August 19 2005, 00:41:46 UTC
I like to be complimented when others experience my works. But in truth, it is never really so... such is life.
This is a good poem however.

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