Across the Line - Chapter 2

Aug 21, 2013 17:14


Title: Across the Line
Author: wild_terrain


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jaeho, across the line

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dilovesyunjae August 21 2013, 13:48:10 UTC
aishhhhhhh....

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wild_terrain August 28 2013, 07:44:19 UTC
Hah! To sum it up in one word... XD

Thanks for reading~

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yoojiyool August 21 2013, 15:55:42 UTC
thank you for update,,^^
this chappy make me really curious~~

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wild_terrain August 28 2013, 07:45:09 UTC
Yehh, there seems to be lots of reasons to be curious. ^_~

Thank you for reading!

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leesayori August 21 2013, 16:49:24 UTC
Glad yoochun is like the chunnie we know. I missed Yunho in this chapter but anticipating his return in the next. And I can't wait for the yunjae meeting. Want to know why there's so much bad blood between them. Well I think from jj's side. Yunho didn't seem to think of the 'other boy' in a bad light. Mayb he feels guilty or something. Dunno.
I remember Yunho mentioned being 'silent sponsor'. If so, why is seunghyun worried abt media knowing his involvement.

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wild_terrain August 28 2013, 07:56:39 UTC
Aw yeh, we only got to meet Yunho briefly in the previous chapter. His story will definitely begin in the next one. ^^

Mmm, the mysteries. I think everyone can see JJ has some issues. Whether Yunho does or not as well we shall see shortly.

I suppose Seunghyun is worried because anything to do with celebrities/well-known people is a very unstable affair. It's hard to control if celebs abuse their power of influence and involve businesses in their dirty laundry and those kinds of things, or if the media gets wind of anything interesting a celeb does and goes to town on it to sell papers, damaging a business's name in the process. Private can become public whether people want it to or not. It doesn't help that JJ's paranoia was so strong. Seunghyun can't help being a little influenced by it, I think.

Thanks for reading!

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noeldenever August 21 2013, 16:51:14 UTC
heck, i'm so confused o_O
this chapter is such a tease..
and jj's frustration and loneliness is so palpable.
my heart is aching for him though i've no idea at all about what happened in his past.
that's how great you are as a writer, you managed to rouse my emotion with just a simple narration, even without a fully defined plot.
will be waiting for the next update <3
p.s. first arc? so this fic will have more than one arc, just like TBMS and echo series??

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wild_terrain August 28 2013, 08:02:49 UTC
You're not alone there. It's very early days. ^^

Aw! My heart aches for him so badly too. You just want to give him a bunch of hugs, right? He puts on a brave face and then the sadness comes... T_T

That's really sweet, I am glad you're already feeling things. Oh emotions... <3

Ah arcs! I think those are mostly in my head to separate each small goal the characters will be experiencing/getting through. I'm not sure they'll be as defined as EOD's for example, but yesss there are definitely arcs. Smaller arcs. ^^

Thank you for reading!

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hyunnyb August 21 2013, 18:11:03 UTC
The mystery continues! I love all the subtle clues, makes it very intriguing. Yoochun was a riot, I love the personality you've given him(so Chunnie). I'm really looking forward to the face to face with Yunho. Seeing that there is a past between them, I wonder what Yunho will think of Jay's obsession with Ricky. Should be interesting! Thanks for the update:)

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wild_terrain August 28 2013, 08:06:57 UTC
The mystery does indeed continue! Keep collecting the puzzle pieces~ ^^

Haha! Yoochun, that crazy kid. He's definitely a good balance for JJ and Seunghyun. The fun that he will be bringing... Glad you're having fun with him too. >D

I am also curious to see what Yunho thinks of JJ's fanboying. XD

Thank you for reading!

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