Across the Line - Chapter 2

[wild_terrain]

Title: Across the Line
Author: wild_terrain

Comments

[gyorgeous]

I was weighing my thoughts on whether I should post my first comment here or elsewhere 'cause I won't be commenting on this chapter alone. Since this is the latest part of the story, I guess I'll just leave my words here.

Anyway, I just want to express how immersed I was while reading the prologue till chapter 2. It's been a while since I last read a yunjae fic and reading your story first was definitely the right decision. I totally love how I feel all the characters and I don't know how to properly express it but, it feels amazing to be aware of the world that exists in this fic. I'm not a sports person but for some reasons, I feel like I'm connected with Tennis as well while reading this and it gave me a really warm and wonderful feeling. It's beautiful. ;;

I can't wait to get to know Jay/JJ, Yunho, Seunghyun and Yoochun more. It's too early to say this but I'm starting to get attached to them. Thank you for this!

[wild_terrain]

Aw wow, you are so very eloquent. ^^

I know what you mean about the YJ fic thing, I confess I read barely any now myself for whatever reason T_T. It is really great that you're here for this one considering your break. I feel quite honored that there is something about this fic so far that has captured your interest. It is likewise fantastic that you've been able to connect with the characters and even tennis. There's nothing more important than that, I think. I'm really glad! ^^

I've found that I've really wanted to be friends with all of these characters for different reasons, so I also can't wait to flesh out their pasts and personalities even more. The ways they influence each other and support each other...I think it will be quite interesting to discover it all. ^^

Thank you so much again for your lovely comment! I hope you enjoy the rest too. ^^

<3

[gyorgeous]

I have to thank your great characterization and writing skills for making me feel the wonders of words again. I didn't realize I was looking for something that has a new world in it, you know, something that is more than just about two people falling in love. I have nothing against solely romance centered stories though, I love them tbh (especially if it's YJ). It's just that I wanted to see and feel a vast, undiscovered world of beauty and pain. A world that makes one feel alive. And your story gave me all these, from the plot to the scenarios and characters. So thank you. :)

This story is an experience I would certainly not want to miss. I am excited to discover the journey your characters have in store for us readers. :)

[shinchul303]

"Yoochun is the fourth voice in the fic's first arc."

Ex-squeezeme? ARCS!!??

Well, fuck YES!

I'll follow...

[wild_terrain]

Oh yes, the arcs. You like arcs, huh? XDD

I think the arcs are mostly in my head to separate each small goal or event the characters will be getting through so I can map it out better. I'm not sure if they'll be super defined arcs yet, but yesss there are definitely arcs. A mixture of small arcs and longer arcs. The first one being the 'setting everything up' arc. =P

Thanks for reading!

[jj_luver]

Awwwwh jay's fanboying is sooo cute! I really wish he could meet Ricky but I don't suppose that's going to happen eh? xD
And o m g g g g I can't help but imagine Ricky lee as Ricky Kim!! asdjlsd! ;;;A;;<3333

I think I MIGHT have an idea about jay's past but I'm going to keep my thoughts to myself till things are a bit clearer to me ;3;
And thank you for the Jaechun!!! I ship soulmate(only as bffs) almost as much as I ship yunjae T________T<3<3<3<33

Certainly anticipating the next chapter where yj meet and how they react to each other! *O*

[wild_terrain]

Okay I havvve to reply to this right now even though I am on my phone lolll.

Hmmmmm? Ricky Lee-Poynter reminds you of Ricky Kim, born Ricky Lee Neely? Geeee I wonder why you thought of him! Hahahahh!!

Out of the four guys who influenced the Ricky Lee-Poynter character, Ricky Kim takes up like 50%. (*cough* and visually like 90%)

And I am pretty sure I found a pic of him playing tennis once?? *angels singing* loll

[kiboushinjitsu]

Things is still blurry (to me lol). It seems like someone ditched someone to make it big?

Solemate interaction is <3!

[wild_terrain]

That's understandable~ It's still very early days. Although there are clues planted here and there, without more of them it won't create a proper picture yet. ^^

I do love how well Soulmates have connected and gotten on together even though they haven't known each other for very long. One of those very special friendships. *squishes them*

Thanks for reading!

[kattan69]

Wonder what is the connection between Yunho and Jay. Can't wait for more to reveal.

[wild_terrain]

Yehh, there are quite a lot of possibilities right now.

Thanks for reading, Kat!