Across the Line - Chapter 3

Aug 29, 2013 00:38


Title: Across the Line
Author: wild_terrain


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jaeho, across the line

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hujanbiru August 28 2013, 15:26:39 UTC
Seem Yunho never met Jaejoong in his life though..and it made me more curious about Jae..Thank you for the update^^

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wild_terrain September 5 2013, 01:32:35 UTC
Yeh, it does seem that way. There was no acknowledgement or recognition at all.

Jae is definitely an enigma right now. ^^;;

Thank you for reading!

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noeldenever August 28 2013, 15:33:17 UTC
ack, i'm still confused o_O
and so curious, have yunjae ever met before? i thought they knew each other in the past but the meeting was just....flat, lol. seems like we'll have a lot of plot twist here.
ok, i'm just gonna digest this chapter first before protesting that it should be longer, otl.
and since you've written 5 pages for the next chapter...UPDATE AGAIN SOON, PLEASE!!!!
p.s. it's so good to have a regular update from you ^^ <3

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wild_terrain September 5 2013, 01:43:14 UTC
Ah, that is all still fine! Each chapter will shed a bit more light. ^^

It does seem they haven't met before. There wasn't much recognition there. It was pretty awkward too lol! As for plot twists... mum's the word right now. =P

hahah!! I have to admit that I laughed out loud at the 'it's so good to have a regular update from you.' I knowwww, I know. XD

Thank you for reading!

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u_kn0wme August 28 2013, 15:46:22 UTC
I am blind.............I dunno how I missed the update for so long, I have basically been stalking this page o.O *runs of to read.

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u_kn0wme August 28 2013, 16:06:38 UTC
Four things 1. Carrot dominoes
2. Pig Latin
3. The fact that park yoochun know's about North-west.
4. Yunjae meeting!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
If each chapter is a domino, your curve is pretty wicked too c; With all the fandom drama going on its so relieving to just simply read some AU yunjae. Hwaiting!! v(^_^)v

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wild_terrain September 5 2013, 01:49:23 UTC
Haha!! Somewhat cracky, right? Oh those boys... ^_~

Damn right, Yoochun knows about North-West! He's a not-so-secret trash monkey. XDD

Oh you smooth talker, you! I'm glad you like my chapter curves. ^_~ (Seriously, kudos for the metaphor and joke in one. XDD)

Tell me about it. There is always going to be some kind of fandom drama... Including stale ones that somehow haven't been stamped out for three years. It can be very emotionally exhausting, even when you aren't looking for them. *sigh*

I'm glad you are enjoying this. Thank you for reading!

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wild_terrain September 5 2013, 01:43:44 UTC
haha!! That's really funny. I guess it all blends in a bit? XD

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donud August 28 2013, 16:07:19 UTC
Their first meeting is indeed weird and unpleasant in a good way. Huahahahaha but I can't wait how JJ dealing with YH later

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wild_terrain September 5 2013, 01:44:59 UTC
LOL! Weird and unpleasant in a good way... You little sadist. KIDDING! I know the feeling, nyahaha. Better them than me. XD

JJ's journey is something I can't wait for, myself. >D

Thank you for reading!

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jaan30 August 28 2013, 16:16:45 UTC
Wow yes that's a lot of information to process, and still confusing! LOL Well it seems like Yunho doesn't remember JJ at all... or he really never met him? Unless JJ was the older boy that was so fabulous... I'm going to read it again later and come back to comment again.^^ Can't think right now!

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jaan30 August 28 2013, 17:57:30 UTC
So I'm back.^^ Yunjae finally meets! It did seem fairly mild, but I have a feeling it would have been more dramatic if we knew what JJ was really thinking. The first part was Seunghyun's point of view, and after Yunho came out of the office it was Yunho's POV... and Yunho is basically clueless at this point ( ... )

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wild_terrain September 5 2013, 02:51:32 UTC
Yes, YunJae met! Ahh yeh I can probably agree that it would have been more dramatic if it had been seen through JJ's eyes. Can't wait to crack his head open properly. ^^;;

Clueless Yunho is fun. LOL!

JJ's 4D ideas and way of thinking makes things more interesting for those around him, that's for sure. With Yoochun as a disciple, things may get a bit hectic.

Changmin and Junsu are here spiritually at the moment. Min as the guru is the bessst, right! Nyahaha.

Yeh, it's not really a secret that Yunho's felt he's had some bad matches in the past that are haunting him and his confidence. Now he's just his own worst enemy with it all. *sigh*

Heh, yeh I wish I could tell you all that kind of stuff! But it's more fun to discover things by yourself, right? In a masochistic way... =P

That trickster Yoochun... It only just begins. LOL

Thank you for reading!

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wild_terrain September 5 2013, 02:41:29 UTC
I bet! XD

Yeh there didn't seem to be any recognition from Yunho's part. Hmm.

JJ is all kinds of fabulous but was he Yunho's? Okay I'll stop with the un-answerable questions. =P

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