Across the Line - Chapter 6

Sep 25, 2013 22:41


Title: Across the Line
Author: wild_terrain

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jaeho, across the line

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dilovesyunjae September 25 2013, 15:38:11 UTC
Cant wait for next chapter!!! And they are so flirty!!! Lol.

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wild_terrain October 3 2013, 10:35:35 UTC
hehe they totally were flirting!! So funny.

Thanks for reading~

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jhyjfan September 25 2013, 15:49:01 UTC
Spot!

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snow_meow September 25 2013, 17:15:54 UTC
Their interaction is really cute and playful.

I cannot wait for the next chapter to see what else will be revealed.

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wild_terrain October 3 2013, 10:36:49 UTC
They were pretty cute mucking around together. *pinches their cheeks*

Mm, me too. =P

Thanks for reading~

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jaan30 September 25 2013, 20:48:23 UTC
Ah, this is cute! Yunho's finally opening up, huh? Their conversation at first is all cute and awkward, then they get to their "D&M" as you call it. Poor Yunho feeling sad even talking about his former crush on the older boy (who I still think is JJ somehow). Yunho was so lonely and confused when the boy disappeared, aww. It's interesting how they both prefer the court they didn't play on too... Anyway, why does JJ think it would be such a disaster if he was that boy? Hmm. Maybe because the guy he's so jealous of actually idolized him? LOL ouch. If it is anyway, he was the reason Yunho played, and probably tried so hard to improve so he'd be as good as his amazing crush. Okay, so maybe it isn't him, but that's my theory and I'm sticking to it! :D ( ... )

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wild_terrain October 18 2013, 09:17:09 UTC
Yehh, it seems so~ He has probably assessed the situation and the type of people that are around and felt comfortable enough to show some of himself to them ( ... )

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wake_up_my_soul September 26 2013, 01:30:09 UTC
That was def flirting! Haha Yunho is really cute and love the way you write both of them! It's a really refreshing fic.
OOOOO I can't wait for the next chappy! I hope your plan behaves!

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wild_terrain October 18 2013, 07:20:06 UTC
hehe, I'd say so too. Who doesn't like to indulge in a bit of harmless flirting? >D

I love that you find it refreshing. Thank you!

So my plan didn't behave........ LOL! But one chapter delay isn't so bad. XDD

Thanks for reading! <3

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