Across the Line - Chapter 6

Sep 25, 2013 22:41


Title: Across the Line
Author: wild_terrain

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jaeho, across the line

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tardiskeeper September 26 2013, 06:42:57 UTC
It's nice to see these two loosening up. Sometimes I have been the stranger who someone finds fit to be a listening companion, the things people will open to about with strangers. Though these two aren't strangers, they are very guarded, but their love of the sport among other things gives them something deeper to connect. I can sense more reluctance from Jay to opening up but it looks like Yunho's disarming stare opens the gates.
Thank you!

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wild_terrain October 18 2013, 07:23:09 UTC
Mm, it's a strange thing, isn't it? I am sure there are some great psychological studies on why that is. lol

Absolutely, sometimes you just need one thing in common for that common ground to break the ice. ^^

Yunho's disarming stare... Brilliant description. I almost got gooey shivers LOL. Jay has no chance! =P

Thank you for reading!

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hyunnyb September 26 2013, 07:51:33 UTC
I can't help myself, I love this chapter! These courts are working their magic on YunJae. They can't help but be attracted. They seem to fall so easily into flirting which I'm hoping is a sign of good things to come. The whole scene of Yunho trying to serve into the wind and then stealing the camera was so funny, you have a real talent for capturing comical moments. I really look forward to updates of this fic because you are weaving such an interesting and entertaining tale.

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wild_terrain October 18 2013, 07:40:47 UTC
Yehh, it's great! It is lucky that those two have so many memories of those courts that they see and feel the magic stronger than others there. I feel like any second Elton John is going to walk out and start singing 'Can You Feel the Love Tonight' haha! Kidding, kidding...

And that flirting... hehe... Too cute.

Oh wow, thank you for saying that. (I'm getting craving to watch cute Yunho fails now.) I am glad you are enjoying it so far! =D

Thank you for reading~ <3

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jejungoppa September 26 2013, 11:34:32 UTC
Aaah their deep conversation does things to me! I love this chapter and I really enjoyed it!

Looking forward to the next chapter!

Thanks for updating

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wild_terrain October 18 2013, 07:41:49 UTC
hehe I am pleased that things have been done to you. >D

Awesome! Thank you fo reading~ =D

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donud September 27 2013, 00:13:28 UTC
Woaahhhh!!! So much progressing with YoonJae.. Never thought YH will so talk active with JJ, since he called him self a hat person lol. Anyway, can you tell me what show is the gif you post? I want to watch it too^^ thanks

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wild_terrain October 18 2013, 07:55:26 UTC
Yep, it's very exciting. I love watching slow affection between people. *_*

Yunho has a great personality and is used to interacting with all kinds of people with his career. Perhaps that helps Yunho with the reserved JaeJoong. ^^

Ooh my pleasure! The picture is from the show "Over the mountain, across the river." DBSK were on it for four episodes in 2006. It is such a good show. DBSK go visit rural areas and either help elderly people with some hard labour tasks, or they talk to the lonely elderly people there. It is both heart-warming and humourous. One couple kept talking about condoms and sex in front of Changmin hahaha.

The scene from the picture occurs in DBSK's 4th episode. You can see it here at the 8 minute mark: http://www.veoh.com/watch/v1069923ypxafTNw Poor Jaejoong being called ugly by the elderly lady after Yunho was praised. XDD

Thank you for reading!

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jhyjfan September 27 2013, 03:50:28 UTC
It's nice to see Jay loosening up around Yun (whose so adorkable).

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wild_terrain October 18 2013, 08:14:49 UTC
Yehh, I think so too~ =D *pinches both of their cheeks*

Thanks for reading!

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