WBY - Not a Winchester Smack Down

[wildblueyonder6]

Title:  WBY - Not a Winchester Smack Down
Characters:  Jamie and River + 1
Summary:  Jamie has another bad idea.
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Comments

[ext_2339507]

I don't think i need to tell you how much i love Jamie and River. Yes i did jump up and down from joy at seeing you had a new story! I just love all the details you always put in your writing.Like Riv hair hanging like damp tendrils, or jamie's eyes being darker because of the pond water. And Jeff's button coming off and hitting Jamie and Riv kicking Jeff's shoe in the pond made me laugh. It seems Jeff was having a bad day and would not take shit from anybody. Certainly not from two teenage boys. Poor Riv, i did feel bad for him. And the end was just sweet and funny. Yep the terrible trio would not be the terrible trio if they would not make sure somebody would come by and check on the boys. This story just made my sunday evening so much better, thank you.

[wildblueyonder6]

Awe, thank you so much. Your comments are always so well thought out and you are very detailed. That helps me to understand what you like. Hopefully what you like is what other people like. I also love that you enjoy the details. Sometimes I think I don't put enough in. I find that I keep going back and re-writing to make it seem more realistic.

Plus the fact that you jumped up and down makes me extremely happy. Even if you are exaggerating!

[joajohns17]

Haven't even read the story yet but I know I'm gonna love. As soon as I opened the page and saw a new story my whole day got better. Love me some River and Jamie! Thanks off to read your lovely story

[wildblueyonder6]

I am thrilled I helped make your day a little bit better! I feel the same way - when I'm having a rough day a good story makes me feel better.

[joajohns17]

OH I loved this!!! I love how Jeff handled the situation. and River trying to get out of it by saying they needed to do chores. Oh I love those boys. Thank you so much for writing this and brightening my day.

[wildblueyonder6]

I love that you love the boys! They have really taken on a live of their own. I have to admit, it is as much from you guys and all the great ideas everyone gives me, as it is from me.

Poor River. He tried to find a way out of it!

[wildblueyonder6]

Ha! Glad you liked! I'm glad you say that you thought it was like a movie. I can see it like that sometimes. The challenge is making YOU see it like that. So happy it worked this time.

[wise_old_crone]

You're baaaaack - and with another little gem for us to cherish forever. I've missed you and the naughty boys!

Oh, first a smackdown and then ANOTHER smackdown... poor boys... hee hee hee. The terrible trio will be in for a (positive) surprise when they come home to find the place clean and sparkling. Hope they don't get into more trouble... until their backsides are healed, that is.

Thanks for sharing :-)

[wildblueyonder6]

It makes me wonder if when the Trio comes home they wonder why everything is so damn CLEAN! So happy you liked. I can't wait to read you birthday gift. I've been mad crazy busy all day so I want to wait until I have the time to sit down and enjoy it.

[wise_old_crone]

Knowing the boys' luck, the trio will probably run into Jeff on their way home. But if the house is tidy, that lets the boys off the hook, right?

Right?

Oh, oh... *scampersawayfrantically*

[wildblueyonder6]

You are an instigator. AN INSTIGATOR! But as usual, now you gave me a bunny to work on. I can't wait to read your fic. I need just an half an hour to read and enjoy. I think I may wait till Mother's Day though. It will be a gift for myself! Even if I'm not your mother.

If I was, I'd send John to deal with you and your instigating. *looks stern*