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[wildcolumbine]

This short piece was originally posted as part of a challenge. The idea was to write something which could fit in the space available for a single comment. I have been going through all my unfinished stories and decided to post a few bits and pieces. It's a post-canon story.

SMOKE DREAMS

The kid was limping, an ungainly jerk of the left hip with each

Comments

[animas1]

Any times of tenderness coming Ennis's way even for a moment that can take the edge off his pain after the loss of Jack is welcomed and so incredibly poignant. Such a tragic and sorrowful man, Ennis rests among the best of Greek tragedy. Thank you for this piece.

Animas

[bentgyro]

Beautiful!!
Thank you!
HT

[eandj]

Thanks
it also makes me sad to think about Jay's life- can't be easy
Paula

[soulan]

I'm glad Jay got something from the encounter, too. Lovely.

[gibbous_moon]

glad to see this. deep and wide and sweet and sad. thank you! keep posting, ok! kj