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May 28, 2009 09:24

This short piece was originally posted as part of a challenge. The idea was to write something which could fit in the space available for a single comment. I have been going through all my unfinished stories and decided to post a few bits and pieces. It's a post-canon story.

SMOKE DREAMS

The kid was limping, an ungainly jerk of the left hip with each ( Read more... )

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cynical21 May 28 2009, 23:27:35 UTC
Nobody breaks a heart as beautifully as you do. Lovely, as always.

CYN

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camillar May 28 2009, 23:46:12 UTC
Gorgeous! Just gorgeous! Thanks for this!
Camilla

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jackien1968 May 29 2009, 02:00:02 UTC
Seconding Cyn's comment, with tears in my eyes.

Thanks.

Hugs,
Jackie

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cutie_patutti65 May 29 2009, 02:37:28 UTC
Beautifully written. Thanks for sharing this.

Connie

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red2blue May 29 2009, 03:51:27 UTC
(speechless...sigh..)

Thank you for sharing.
m

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