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[wildcolumbine]

UP A LAZY RIVER

This is just a bit of nonsense, more a writing exercise than anything. Enjoy.

***Sinuous and dreamy, like a languid river flowing from the tributaries of his arms to the wide delta of his legs, Ennis stretched across the bed. Jack decided to swim upstream, sampling the littoral delights on the way. On the left-hand shore some toes

Comments

Nonsense

[ohiomyown]

Nonsense from you beats prose from most others.

Thanks! I think I knew where we were at all times, but not sure!
:-)
Judy

Re: Nonsense

[wildcolumbine]

Awww, thanks :) It was fun to write, and the images in my head were fun to look at too ;)

[chamilet]

Very nice:)

[sweetje]

I like this. It's an interesting way of describing our guys' loving on each other. Thank you. : )
Debra

[torry28]

You have a very poetic way to describe making love, all your writing has that special something I miss very much. Thank you for this.
Have a wonderful Weekend.
Love,
Torry

[tizi17]

this is so sweet and wonderful... thank you for coming back and giving us this nice piece!