I just started reading this lovely story. It is so heart wrenching and painfully sad. These two young men could have had such a beautiful life together. Now they have finally come together at the later years of their life. Both afraid to say the wrong thing, and do the wrong thing. Ellis afraid period. Still does not want to be gay. However he is now obviously relenting to the true nature of his sexual preferences. I love the way this has a true feeling running through it. So much want its palpable, and desire for the way it might have been. It is such beautiful writing. I am enjoying it more than I can even express. Its been a very long time since I have read one of your stories. You are very exceptional at the way you make your characters so real. Looking forward to more. thanks Janice
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Loved The Outland,
Ready for more.
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Thanks for the update.
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But then both Jack and him have something they don't have in the OS - a second chance, and a more tolerated society.
Well boys (even though at 62 years old), don't blow up your chance this time, it is going to be your LAST chance to make things right.
Hua
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